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Pipe Dreams
I have decided...
To obliterate my dreams...
Seeing how..
real life has a way
Of changing ... certain things
Taking my thoughts.. to extremes
Bringin my hopes..to its knees
I swear sometimes...
I cant see the forest
for the trees
As I try to hold on to hope
yet it slides threw my fingers
In the breeze...
Like grains of sand...
Some shit in this life
Is too complicated
On a scale too grand...
Yet they say I was born..
To Overstand
Every strand
Make the winds move
At my command
Have power like Moses
to part the red sea...
Yet I ...
can't even part
with the pain
inside ...of me
Cause Life aint like
those butterfly kisses
Champaign smiles
Or wealthy well wishes
Life is the bite
Like winters cold
Life is the story
with a twist that unfolds
and..
I wonder if it's too much
for me to be
succesful in my own right
I don't wanna steal no shows
I just wanna shine in my own light
I wanna win...
without always havin to fight
I want the arms of a real love
to hold me...late at night
Then suddenly
I feel like I've been hit
Reality just came and smacked
The dog shit...
Right outa me
As I feel like a fiend
tryin to hold on to hope
Like some good dope to smoke
chasing after...
Pipe Dreams
To obliterate my dreams...
Seeing how..
real life has a way
Of changing ... certain things
Taking my thoughts.. to extremes
Bringin my hopes..to its knees
I swear sometimes...
I cant see the forest
for the trees
As I try to hold on to hope
yet it slides threw my fingers
In the breeze...
Like grains of sand...
Some shit in this life
Is too complicated
On a scale too grand...
Yet they say I was born..
To Overstand
Every strand
Make the winds move
At my command
Have power like Moses
to part the red sea...
Yet I ...
can't even part
with the pain
inside ...of me
Cause Life aint like
those butterfly kisses
Champaign smiles
Or wealthy well wishes
Life is the bite
Like winters cold
Life is the story
with a twist that unfolds
and..
I wonder if it's too much
for me to be
succesful in my own right
I don't wanna steal no shows
I just wanna shine in my own light
I wanna win...
without always havin to fight
I want the arms of a real love
to hold me...late at night
Then suddenly
I feel like I've been hit
Reality just came and smacked
The dog shit...
Right outa me
As I feel like a fiend
tryin to hold on to hope
Like some good dope to smoke
chasing after...
Pipe Dreams
Published 24th Oct 2013
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Anonymous
24th Oct 2013 8:46pm
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25th Oct 2013 00:06am
24th Oct 2013 8:47pm
Lovely Fire I feel your soul poured into this poem.. it saddens me you're feeling this way.. poignant poem so masterfully written.. peace Brenda
25th Oct 2013 00:07am
SO True My LovelY Brenda... (Crim dela Crim)
YOu are so nuturing to my path on DUP I love it so much when You stop by!
saddness is my best friend these days
Fire
YOu are so nuturing to my path on DUP I love it so much when You stop by!
saddness is my best friend these days
Fire
24th Oct 2013 9:24pm
Perfect capture to trial by Fire...indeed the angst screams-hope the smoke clears Dear Fire!!!
25th Oct 2013 00:08am
SOul You are Marvelous and I appreciate your comments so... much so remarkable the care you take in what you say
XOXO
Fire
XOXO
Fire
24th Oct 2013 9:40pm
I bow before you my Queen in honor of your poetic genius that wows me every time. Watch out world here comes greatness! Dynamic ink my friend for you exploded indeed.
25th Oct 2013 00:09am
Elbaby....
Words cant even cover the doors that have opened since we have connected....
Your support on these pages is priceless...
Thank you for reading!
XOXO
Fire
Words cant even cover the doors that have opened since we have connected....
Your support on these pages is priceless...
Thank you for reading!
XOXO
Fire
Anonymous
24th Oct 2013 10:56pm
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25th Oct 2013 00:10am
Broomie...
Life is great and F n sucks at the same time!!!
Thank you for always being a true blue friend to me...
with honest and heartfelt critique!
XOXO
Fire
PS...
Your sone is now my new nephew....( smile)
So we are sistahs ya know!
Life is great and F n sucks at the same time!!!
Thank you for always being a true blue friend to me...
with honest and heartfelt critique!
XOXO
Fire
PS...
Your sone is now my new nephew....( smile)
So we are sistahs ya know!
Anonymous
25th Oct 2013 5:24am
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Anonymous
24th Oct 2013 11:55pm
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25th Oct 2013 00:11am
Thank YOu Gabriel....
YOu are such a warm fresh breath of air to me dear heart!
XOXO
Fire
YOu are such a warm fresh breath of air to me dear heart!
XOXO
Fire
25th Oct 2013 00:27am
You keep striving never quit never give up. Love it good to see writing again sis.
Red
Red
25th Oct 2013 00:31am
aaah but it is YOU .... YOU that I miss....
I am so glad to see you and your beautiful Red Head grace my pages...
XOXO
Fire
I am so glad to see you and your beautiful Red Head grace my pages...
XOXO
Fire
Anonymous
25th Oct 2013 1:49am
Felt this. The want to cry, rail, scream!, trash it all and start over. It shouldn't have to be so hard... off-balance again. But there's a thin line of hope tied off, anchored, unmoving. It's still there. You have a beautiful way of expressing the hard stuff, Fire. So thankful you share it.
~ Michelle
~ Michelle
27th Oct 2013 6:46pm
I live this journey more than you might imagine. A relatable poem that fills my heart. Excellent ink!:)
28th Oct 2013 8:38pm
Life is 'Swings n' Roundabouts' Firebyrd.
What goes around, comes, I would love everyone's Pipedreams to manifest. How cool would that be,?
Great pen,
Take care ,
KG
What goes around, comes, I would love everyone's Pipedreams to manifest. How cool would that be,?
Great pen,
Take care ,
KG
28th Dec 2013 7:18am
Justice and Equality, Comfort and Just something to Hold onto... would you trade the shine for it?
Not that I'm offering. I won't strip away anyone's patina of panache. I'm stating that a 5%er ultimately has the greatest wealth, for all that's lacking.
Not that I'm offering. I won't strip away anyone's patina of panache. I'm stating that a 5%er ultimately has the greatest wealth, for all that's lacking.
