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Murdering Poetry
Hold it..
STOP...
Discontinue your game!!!
Why do you insist on Murdering this site's poetical aim?
I am one who loves poetry, dance and art
Not erotically created jive and fart
Mozart is a hero of any musical age
Beethoven a Wizard... A musical Sage
These things are art...
Poetry nonetheless
Why would you dirty something so clean and harmless?
Your Erotica smut does not deserve a page
It's slowly killing poetry
Therefore
GARBAGE....
Don't mistake my honesty for harshness or even mean words
You are murdering poetry as we know it
and this I find ABSURD
Dumpster Porn such as this belongs on a porn site
Redtube, Porn Hub, keezmovies...
These seem alright
You stand by yourself...
You are all alone...
Bitch and whine all you want...
Continue to moan
You welcome the thought of being called a dog
So i urge you... catch this bone you cowardly dog!
Re-evaluate your situation and let's see what we can do
And on that note i wish you all the best
Farewell for now...
Adieu
STOP...
Discontinue your game!!!
Why do you insist on Murdering this site's poetical aim?
I am one who loves poetry, dance and art
Not erotically created jive and fart
Mozart is a hero of any musical age
Beethoven a Wizard... A musical Sage
These things are art...
Poetry nonetheless
Why would you dirty something so clean and harmless?
Your Erotica smut does not deserve a page
It's slowly killing poetry
Therefore
GARBAGE....
Don't mistake my honesty for harshness or even mean words
You are murdering poetry as we know it
and this I find ABSURD
Dumpster Porn such as this belongs on a porn site
Redtube, Porn Hub, keezmovies...
These seem alright
You stand by yourself...
You are all alone...
Bitch and whine all you want...
Continue to moan
You welcome the thought of being called a dog
So i urge you... catch this bone you cowardly dog!
Re-evaluate your situation and let's see what we can do
And on that note i wish you all the best
Farewell for now...
Adieu
Published 19th Jan 2011
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19th Jan 2011 7:43am
the poem has good flow i and rhythm i can compliment you on that but erotic poetry is ruining poetry... ? i can't necessarily say that i agree.
a poem needs honesty and passion in my opinion to be any good ... and yeah i agree some people's erotic poetry is crap... but in my opinion... quite a few on this site are genuinely great poems as they are filled with raw emotion and dont hold back any truth.
but yet again you are being honest in this poem... you're not holding back your thoughts or emotions so i give you that one too.
its an alright poem... and its okay..
i just cant fully agree
keep writing. you show talent
a poem needs honesty and passion in my opinion to be any good ... and yeah i agree some people's erotic poetry is crap... but in my opinion... quite a few on this site are genuinely great poems as they are filled with raw emotion and dont hold back any truth.
but yet again you are being honest in this poem... you're not holding back your thoughts or emotions so i give you that one too.
its an alright poem... and its okay..
i just cant fully agree
keep writing. you show talent
19th Jan 2011 7:47am
hey i dont mind erotic poems either.. its erotic smut i have a problem with.. and thanks
Well, well, our friend holdit has inspired yet another ditty from someone here - join the rapidly growing club. It's an irony, we should be thankful for that inspiration, even though we may encounter difficult feelings in the process and have a hard job swallowing our initial distaste over his unconventional behaviour.
Wouldn't it be great if we could steer him away from the garbage can he loves so much and turn him into a poet somehow.
Alas, on much of the evidence so far, the necessary raw material may be somewhat lacking. Let's hope I'm proved to be wrong.
Nice write, by the way - you expressed your sentiments clearly & with dignity - and that's also the rub, because while we're talking about him the poetry can get lost.
Best ~ Abra
Wouldn't it be great if we could steer him away from the garbage can he loves so much and turn him into a poet somehow.
Alas, on much of the evidence so far, the necessary raw material may be somewhat lacking. Let's hope I'm proved to be wrong.
Nice write, by the way - you expressed your sentiments clearly & with dignity - and that's also the rub, because while we're talking about him the poetry can get lost.
Best ~ Abra
19th Jan 2011 12:56pm
I wonder if he met a woman on the site who was nice to him while all others were not whether she could convince him to write a non-smut poem.
Sorry, rambling - anyway, thoroughly enjoyed it. Laughed so much I even told my friend the whole story just so I could read her this piece. Well done.
Sorry, rambling - anyway, thoroughly enjoyed it. Laughed so much I even told my friend the whole story just so I could read her this piece. Well done.
19th Jan 2011 3:49pm
19th Jan 2011 4:00pm
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19th Jan 2011 3:29pm
I really like the rhythm ... I agree completely. A random put-out of rude, unoriginal words is not the kind of poetry that I am drawn to.
29th Jun 2011 3:27am
this poem speaks....it...it really speaks(voice braking) it made chuckapik (my little brother)think that he is slim but in truth and fact he is most certainly not...
