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Silent
Scared
Hurt
But you lost care
Looking for grip
The hands who held me close
Now so cold,they let go
Tears
Aches and pains
The one I love
Broke me and I shattered like glass
Said he loved me
Guess our time seemed to have past
We expired
Scared
Hurt
But you lost care
Looking for grip
The hands who held me close
Now so cold,they let go
Tears
Aches and pains
The one I love
Broke me and I shattered like glass
Said he loved me
Guess our time seemed to have past
We expired
Published 23rd Oct 2013
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24th Oct 2013 12:58pm
Direct and heartfelt words..
That's all I can say really.
My mind goes blank on this one, I love the mood.
That's all I can say really.
My mind goes blank on this one, I love the mood.
24th Oct 2013 5:10pm
Everything expires, except REAL LOVE! Sadly, it takes ink emotions like this, to recognize and prepare you for greater. I really enjoyed this! Xo
Pen Hug~
Pen Hug~
24th Oct 2013 9:06pm
PIP YOU are sooo real so vivid so clear...
I would love to see this to music
MUch Love
Fire
I would love to see this to music
MUch Love
Fire
27th Oct 2013 6:32am
Great piece sweets!!!
Strongly heartfelt!!
You ink very well!!
Sir Lancelott
Strongly heartfelt!!
You ink very well!!
Sir Lancelott
