despairing...

So sorrowful...to lose someone that we cherish. The very day seems to sympathize.....weeping tears that are as the pain, that we feel in our hearts.

Can truly  f e e l  the emotional atmosphere of this piece, my friend.

thanks, Enchantress...I wanted
to capture the misery of the scene
and at the same time to leave a
little ambiguity as to whether it
is the rain or the person walking
away that is hard and grey..:)

Amazing how few words can captivate and intrigue your mind to think further deeper thoughts. Love those...love THIS :) Nice job, D.

few words....
pain
comes rite thru

sharp image with the signature
dartford ambiguity. Excellent, p...

I live in dread of
being entirely un
derstood...thanks, jag..:)

No chance of that anytime soon,
but you will always be a poet's
poet

I feel the despair...
Everyone's been there before... very relatable...

Sad but true Piece
Loved it!


Darker

Oh, that's so full
full of bitterness and
empty of hope ...
Those emotions
packed into just
17 syllables.
Kudos to you!

I guess painful
emotions come
in short sharp
bursts

like thunderstorms
or little verses..:)

Oh yes, they do.
Eruptions of pain.