Sloane Square Underground Station...

yes....a qwik eXistential chuckly chortle
           always
      does a trick for th'morning moanin'

grazie

ah, devices that lift us up
with almost no effort on our part...
I might be out of my depth here...

I always feel safe on
the move, but I struggle
with arrival...

a rival to contend
with...

You're good at this. You've got me contemplating 5-7-5 possibilities all the time. Out of your depth but you're still inspirational. I've got a weird yet mild fear of escalators. I like your take on this style.

I've always felt ok on the
ones going down, which
is a little worrying...the
17 syllable thing is a
good discipline, but now
I want to mess it up a
touch..16 here, 18 or
19 just to annoy it..:)

& you should...poetry belongs to the poets. Rules are made to be broken...

I shall, I promise..:)

Looking forward to that mess :-).

Even if its only
an elevater that lifts you up -
its the results that matter!
Fine work.

I feel safe under
ground...which    
sounds more
morbid than
I intended...

Well, Paul, I too love
the underground :-)!