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Precise first time when...
The precise first time when my dick penetrates your pussy
A moment of extreme pleasure where my cock finds sweetly
Wetness of your pussy, her lips rubbing to my penis glossy
And this extreme pleasure spreads throughout all my body
From end of my ten toes to the smallest part of my hair
Stiffness of my cock then gives a new sensation there
Which leads slowly but surely to the ultimate enjoyment
Its control to achieve it together then added enjoyment
Liberating spasm of our powerful orgasm is the tension
During original moment of this act so delicious as a sun
Published 21st Oct 2013
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- Edited 21st Oct 2013 11:42pm
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21st Oct 2013 11:43pm
Delight up to be burnt... (I imagine, never tested).
Thank you for your comment, Gabriel
Thank you for your comment, Gabriel
22nd Oct 2013 00:47am
22nd Oct 2013 3:05am
22nd Oct 2013 11:45am
22nd Oct 2013 11:56am
Thank you so much for your comment, dear S2K-Xquizit (very simple nickname), and welcome in DUP!
22nd Oct 2013 12:14pm
Hey, sorry Gabi!
I have been inspired by a book of novel by Philippe Delerm "La Première gorgée de bière et autres plaisirs minuscules" which describes the joys that can be taken in the "insignificant things" that make up life. It was translated into English as "The Small Pleasures of Life"... I read it in 1997 and always I think by this way of life to be enjoyed by small things... In this case, it is the first event in a fantastic thing, making love and each part of this event could be described by such a poem, in my opinion.
I have been inspired by a book of novel by Philippe Delerm "La Première gorgée de bière et autres plaisirs minuscules" which describes the joys that can be taken in the "insignificant things" that make up life. It was translated into English as "The Small Pleasures of Life"... I read it in 1997 and always I think by this way of life to be enjoyed by small things... In this case, it is the first event in a fantastic thing, making love and each part of this event could be described by such a poem, in my opinion.
