Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
21st Oct 2013 6:33am
Wow, you stopped my heart in nine words and spouted me breathless. This is wonderful!
21st Oct 2013 6:57am
Thank you for that touching comment, and Reading List add. I find great solace in walks through this season with mi amor ... I'm glad you saw it.
Anonymous
21st Oct 2013 6:42am
Reading this two ways and looking for enlightenment:
A bird's feather falls slowly as the bird comes to rest on a bare bough
An autumn leaf falls, as the woods beckon to the writer
A bird's feather falls slowly as the bird comes to rest on a bare bough
An autumn leaf falls, as the woods beckon to the writer
21st Oct 2013 6:59am
Yes PM your falling leaf interpretation is the one, but I love that you found another path that I didn't even consider.
LSP
LSP
21st Oct 2013 9:53am
21st Oct 2013 11:44am
I'm glad you enjoyed it and took time to comment. It's appreciated.
LSP
LSP
22nd Oct 2013 6:46am
PetMin covered my question. This stirs the part of me obsessed with prognostication and i love it. A precision poem, practically magic.
