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From behind
You always turning your back to me
You just waiting it from behind
You just want me giving it to you
Sure I give you,take it!
You just waiting it from behind
You just want me giving it to you
Sure I give you,take it!
Published 20th Oct 2013
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20th Oct 2013 10:07am
20th Oct 2013 11:46am
Is not really best,i was just inspired by a sexy scene from a movie,but thanks malin you are kind.
20th Oct 2013 6:36pm
Short and simple but still you manage to attract the perception of it plus that is one hell of position. Good lines
20th Oct 2013 8:56pm
21st Oct 2013 00:00am
the shortness or simplicity of a poem does not matter as long as the reader visualize it honey...
good job !!!
good job !!!
21st Oct 2013 5:24pm
22nd Oct 2013 12:41pm
Seems like you were giving 'it' as opposed to receiving it
with ur starting line lol
luckily I can tell u meant HE was doing you from behind lol
On that I must say, HOT!! :)
with ur starting line lol
luckily I can tell u meant HE was doing you from behind lol
On that I must say, HOT!! :)
22nd Oct 2013 1:13pm
Seems like you were giving 'it' as opposed to receiving it
with ur starting line lol
luckily I can tell u meant HE was doing you from behind lol
On that I must say, HOT!! :)
with ur starting line lol
luckily I can tell u meant HE was doing you from behind lol
On that I must say, HOT!! :)
22nd Oct 2013 2:54pm
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