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Like dew to a blade
I cling to her strange peril
A narcotic drip

Written by LobodeSanPedro

Published 19th Oct 2013

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summultima (uma)

19th Oct 2013 8:46pm

crispy fitting verses, Lan!
liked the comparisons given & the final statement like a jist of the above two..was juz wondering is this some form of special poetry, as am ignorant to haiku & other similar formats.

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LobodeSanPedro

20th Oct 2013 8:23am

This is written in the format of haiku ... 5-7-5; but haiku is more nature based. Senryu which is written in the same format deals with human needs and emotion. I've been playing with metaphorical links between the two but I'd call the writing senryu...

Thanks for the read

LSP