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I KILLED A MAN THE OTHER DAY
I've been watching this pedophile
who lives five blocks away.
He is tall and young, and raped
a five year old girl, that's what
my neighbors' say.
He leaves the house around
seven to go to work comes
back home around seven
eats a TV dinner with just
a fork.
I decided on a time not to soon
killing him would be best in the
afternoon.
I approached his door dressed like
a Mormon thinking he wouldn't mind
a Joseph smith sermon.
He opens the door, and I see the
fork he was using, to eat his TV dinner.
I tell him that I am here to
spread the gospel of Jesus Christ
to replenish all sinners.
I don't believe in god he replied
now I have a more of a reason to
kill him after he replied.
Three words I said;"BURN,IN,HELL",
I drew my gun and shot him twice
in the chest, thinking this is
all for the best.
This is for the girl he raped,
the girls tied up emotion
that cant be escaped.
who lives five blocks away.
He is tall and young, and raped
a five year old girl, that's what
my neighbors' say.
He leaves the house around
seven to go to work comes
back home around seven
eats a TV dinner with just
a fork.
I decided on a time not to soon
killing him would be best in the
afternoon.
I approached his door dressed like
a Mormon thinking he wouldn't mind
a Joseph smith sermon.
He opens the door, and I see the
fork he was using, to eat his TV dinner.
I tell him that I am here to
spread the gospel of Jesus Christ
to replenish all sinners.
I don't believe in god he replied
now I have a more of a reason to
kill him after he replied.
Three words I said;"BURN,IN,HELL",
I drew my gun and shot him twice
in the chest, thinking this is
all for the best.
This is for the girl he raped,
the girls tied up emotion
that cant be escaped.
Published 16th Oct 2013
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16th Oct 2013 10:46pm
The irony is is sickening, seeing as such a large number of pedophiles are religious. Why the emphasis on the fork? I thought it would play a role of some kind, but you just used it so it would rhyme.
16th Oct 2013 11:10pm
The reason I put emphasis on the fork is not to make it rhyme, but merely to find my character to indulge himself to kill this pedophile.I put myself in a position in a killers mind. How would a killer set his victim up, How will I kill him. These are all attributes on the precise time he came home, when he left, and what he did in the evenings. Its like a lion stalking its prey it chooses its victims and kills them following them for miles and miles away. If this poem sickened you well you might as well look in a different category of poetry, because this is my style, I surely wouldn't mock your poems. Im doing my poetry but you must be the other guy AKA CRITIC of being a ass.
