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Dark Letters
I am tormented and weakened
crushed by a stampede of emotions
that have run amock in the
wilderness of my mind
I hold within these breaths a kiss
which was bestowed upon me
a few nights ago
a kiss only heard of in fairytales
and for this I am tormented
which causes my heart to turn
to stone
I beseech thee oh perils of love
Why does thou toy with ones
morality
crushed by a stampede of emotions
that have run amock in the
wilderness of my mind
I hold within these breaths a kiss
which was bestowed upon me
a few nights ago
a kiss only heard of in fairytales
and for this I am tormented
which causes my heart to turn
to stone
I beseech thee oh perils of love
Why does thou toy with ones
morality
Published 13th Oct 2013
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13th Oct 2013 5:18pm
13th Oct 2013 9:52pm
13th Oct 2013 10:37pm
Definitely a lot of emotions at play, here. Well worded, but not too wordy. I love it!
14th Oct 2013 3:23pm
I have to agree with the others, incredibly emotional write, short, to the point.
Brilliance.
nice write!
Brilliance.
nice write!
14th Oct 2013 6:00pm
Tight yet powerful writing. The tease of the last three lines invites re-reading and then finding more in the poem. Clever.
