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What About tomorrow?
I want to kill myself,
But i dont know how tomorrow will be.
So i will wait and see,
If killing myself is necessary.
But i dont know how tomorrow will be.
So i will wait and see,
If killing myself is necessary.
Published 15th Jan 2011
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Anonymous
16th Jan 2011 8:02am
I absolutely love this. In but 4 lines you captured the essence of a well-thought out poem.
shortest poem i've ever comented on but i like the idea behind it I should write this on my wall so i could read it when i wake up lol
4th Feb 2011 4:57am
4th Feb 2011 5:04am
Capitalize the 'i's and this is a near perfect backwards positive poem - I like!
4th Feb 2011 9:29am
You may not of capitalized the 'i's but that doesnt matter :) because i dont really see the need to as without it it makes the poem more 'real' people who are erally depressed and suicidal dont care much about themselves... often dont even see themsleves as an I... a worthy capitalized being so dont worry... but i get where your coming from la. i've never been a fan of restricting poetry due to grammar and stuff so idk if im a worthy person to listen to ^.& anywho either way all the best.. you captuerd the essence of many peoples struggles in just four short lines. great stuff :P
2nd Mar 2011 8:41am
4th Mar 2016 4:14am
Its amazing. So are you. I'm taking dudes idea ^^ and writing this on my wall. If that's cool with you.
