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This feeling...
I can feel it
The insanity within me
rising
Growing stronger minute
by minute
The infectious lust,
the want
To give into it's dark desires
How I'd love to do
its bidding
The darkness of this
feeling...the sensation
Swirling around me
Surrounding, shrouding
Drowning out my senses
I want to lose myself within
this criminal must
To turn this creeping
feeling...sensation into more
Well it's a start for me, trying to improve on
writing dark poetry. But please feel free to give any tips and critique
The insanity within me
rising
Growing stronger minute
by minute
The infectious lust,
the want
To give into it's dark desires
How I'd love to do
its bidding
The darkness of this
feeling...the sensation
Swirling around me
Surrounding, shrouding
Drowning out my senses
I want to lose myself within
this criminal must
To turn this creeping
feeling...sensation into more
Well it's a start for me, trying to improve on
writing dark poetry. But please feel free to give any tips and critique
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