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Morning Sun
He could look right into my
Heart,
Like a flower opening to the
Sun,
I was filled with his loving
Soul
Clinging to his edges as he
Held me beautifully
His breath came over me like
Summer breeze
Breathing in my honeysuckle
Perfume while the day shined on
Heart,
Like a flower opening to the
Sun,
I was filled with his loving
Soul
Clinging to his edges as he
Held me beautifully
His breath came over me like
Summer breeze
Breathing in my honeysuckle
Perfume while the day shined on
Published 11th Oct 2013
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12th Oct 2013 3:28pm
11th Oct 2013 5:10pm
morning sun ..!!
what an element to compare ur loved one to...
great stuff
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cyanide..
what an element to compare ur loved one to...
great stuff
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cyanide..
12th Oct 2013 3:29pm
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11th Oct 2013 9:51pm
I am enthralled by the romance in this piece! Your love of all things natural shines through :)
12th Oct 2013 3:31pm
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12th Oct 2013 1:16pm
One brief moment seeming like it was infinate :-) i love it when you do that...
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13th Oct 2013 4:25pm
15th Oct 2013 11:35am
Elegant and warm poem, I like your write...
And I love the last stenza :
'Breathing in my honeysuckle
'Perfume while the day shined on
And I love the last stenza :
'Breathing in my honeysuckle
'Perfume while the day shined on
15th Oct 2013 2:27pm
16th Oct 2013 1:20pm
