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Chicken waffles and fries,
Bring tears to my eyes,
Mary jane keeps me high,
Munchies keep me satisfied.
Ice creams and cookies,
Music makes me boogie,
Burning like a noogie.
I mob deep,
Cuz the way nikkas shook me,
Dont lose me,
If hip hop died,
Will it choose me?
Fruits are juicy,
But i smoke the loose leaf,
Drink liquor not tea,
My eyes bleed,
And pen on the sheet,
Cool beat.
Going random like non sense,
Money aint my concept,
Aint even from the projects,
Cuz im no ones object,
136 letters for this comment!
Bring tears to my eyes,
Mary jane keeps me high,
Munchies keep me satisfied.
Ice creams and cookies,
Music makes me boogie,
Burning like a noogie.
I mob deep,
Cuz the way nikkas shook me,
Dont lose me,
If hip hop died,
Will it choose me?
Fruits are juicy,
But i smoke the loose leaf,
Drink liquor not tea,
My eyes bleed,
And pen on the sheet,
Cool beat.
Going random like non sense,
Money aint my concept,
Aint even from the projects,
Cuz im no ones object,
136 letters for this comment!
Published 14th Jan 2011
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14th Jan 2011 9:00pm
It wasn't perfect, not in grammar or spelling but above all it made me smile. I really needed it and that's why I like this piece, the rhyming scheme is easy, it flows, it makes general sense and you don't use typical imagery. Definately a fun one to read.
16th Jan 2011 7:22am
18th Feb 2011 3:58am
