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Dad (On The Outside)
A Christmas phone call from the savior that never showed
“Maybe next year”
Dial tone
The tears burn deep in the soul
They stay put
Refusing to rise
Stuck in the pain of a boy who loves his father too much
Too much to cry
“Maybe next year”
Dial tone
The tears burn deep in the soul
They stay put
Refusing to rise
Stuck in the pain of a boy who loves his father too much
Too much to cry
Published 10th Oct 2013
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12th Oct 2013 4:46am
Your voice sounds familiar- Did you write a poem on bullying that went viral by chance?
Anywho, This is really sombre and beautiful. I don't think words can adequately express how much I love this poem. (And your soothing voice!)
Anywho, This is really sombre and beautiful. I don't think words can adequately express how much I love this poem. (And your soothing voice!)
13th Oct 2013 3:59am
pretty sure the viral is not me. glad you enjoyed it. thank you for the positive feedback. much appreciated. cheers...
