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****Feathers****
My feathers are falling
they are now everywhere
all over the floor
and stuck in my hair.
My feathers are falling
soon I'll be unable to fly
not sure what happened
I'm not quite sure why.
My feathers are falling
soon my wings will be gone
I will stuff them in a pillow
with my life, I'll move on.
My feathers are falling
I am naked and lost
I shall try to be happy though
no matter what the cost.
My feathers are falling
but I am strong, I'll survive
now my life will start over
I'll be thankful I'm alive.
My feathers are falling
have you lost all yours too?
another earthbound angel
what's a good girl to do?
My feathers are falling
time to try some new things
to have some naughty fun
without a halo or wings
they are now everywhere
all over the floor
and stuck in my hair.
My feathers are falling
soon I'll be unable to fly
not sure what happened
I'm not quite sure why.
My feathers are falling
soon my wings will be gone
I will stuff them in a pillow
with my life, I'll move on.
My feathers are falling
I am naked and lost
I shall try to be happy though
no matter what the cost.
My feathers are falling
but I am strong, I'll survive
now my life will start over
I'll be thankful I'm alive.
My feathers are falling
have you lost all yours too?
another earthbound angel
what's a good girl to do?
My feathers are falling
time to try some new things
to have some naughty fun
without a halo or wings
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Re: ****Feathers****
Anonymous
9th Oct 2013 8:14pm
Deborahlee3313,
From the serious beginnings to the playful, naughty finish I loved the flow of this write! We should all have some fun without our halo or wings! LOL!!!
Enjoyed!!!
tornado
From the serious beginnings to the playful, naughty finish I loved the flow of this write! We should all have some fun without our halo or wings! LOL!!!
Enjoyed!!!
tornado
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9th Oct 2013 11:07pm
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9th Oct 2013 8:30pm
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9th Oct 2013 9:43pm
Has a resonance with the leaf shedding of autumn (fall in US). It can also be a symbol of how a woman can still be a woman (and still have desires) despite fading youth.
My feathers are falling
but I am strong, I'll survive
now my life will start over
I'll be thankful I'm alive....
My feathers are falling
time to try some new things
to have some naughty fun
without a halo or wings.
My feathers are falling
but I am strong, I'll survive
now my life will start over
I'll be thankful I'm alive....
My feathers are falling
time to try some new things
to have some naughty fun
without a halo or wings.
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9th Oct 2013 11:08pm
Re: ****Feathers****
10th Oct 2013 00:36am
"Time to have some naughty fun"
Yea I been waiting for you to do that!!
Seriously, lol a very good write :)
Yea I been waiting for you to do that!!
Seriously, lol a very good write :)
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12th Oct 2013 2:55am
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Anonymous
10th Oct 2013 3:10am
Fabulous poem....I could identify so strongly....just a wonderful write
and a satisfying read.....
Peace and love
Kitty
and a satisfying read.....
Peace and love
Kitty
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12th Oct 2013 2:55am
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10th Oct 2013 11:20am
It's been awhile since I've heard your poetic voice; and this was well worth the wait. A wonderful life lesson in this piece on so many levels. Perfect Image as well.
LSP
LSP
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12th Oct 2013 2:57am
thanks so much
have been busy lately
I published an ebook containing all my erotic poems and now I am 17 chapters into writing my first full blown erotic fiction book
have missed everyone!!!!
have been busy lately
I published an ebook containing all my erotic poems and now I am 17 chapters into writing my first full blown erotic fiction book
have missed everyone!!!!
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Anonymous
11th Oct 2013 2:19am
Loved to see something from you again. And I knew you'd get a bit of naughty in there somewhere...
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12th Oct 2013 2:57am
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13th Oct 2013 10:13pm
what a beautiful story !!I loved the entire rhythm..
never knew life after death was so fantasizing n the evolution that happens just before a rebirth ahh even more beautiful.....
loved the whole concept deb .. keep Penning
cyanide..
never knew life after death was so fantasizing n the evolution that happens just before a rebirth ahh even more beautiful.....
loved the whole concept deb .. keep Penning
cyanide..
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16th Oct 2013 6:37pm
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12th Aug 2014 6:00am
There is a turning point in life for everyone. Innocence lost leads to another path of experience and renewal. Some might feel sad but the way I see it, your pillow is no longer half full and you have something big and fluffy to rest your head on while you lie back and explore your passionate side. Enjoy the ride...
JJ
JJ
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13th Aug 2014 5:42am