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not yet, not yet..!
and after, he
lay back and
lit a cig
arette...
she silent
ly fumed, not
having quite
got to it,
yet...
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Re: not yet, not yet..!
9th Oct 2013 2:53pm
Hehe I can imagine the scene
Unfulfilled with hot desire
When he gets there
Toys oh who the god invented
Wanna shake their hand
If it wasn't so busy right now. .
I might have done
XD
Unfulfilled with hot desire
When he gets there
Toys oh who the god invented
Wanna shake their hand
If it wasn't so busy right now. .
I might have done
XD
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9th Oct 2013 4:42pm
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Anonymous
9th Oct 2013 4:04pm
lol, that was good.....!!!!
omg , that's excellent writing :)))
omg , that's excellent writing :)))
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9th Oct 2013 4:38pm
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9th Oct 2013 7:54pm
Hahaha!
You lit the cigarette and
she fumed. Oh, that's so
extraordinary GOOD!
Well, men ...
You lit the cigarette and
she fumed. Oh, that's so
extraordinary GOOD!
Well, men ...
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Anonymous
24th Oct 2013 2:45pm
selfish...
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