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Neurotic Man
We can't have it all
but you think that we can
we might as well be dull
we can't swim, let's stand.
Art forms dreams
and dreams form love,
it's not all it seems,
and you've flown above.
Tell me, oh Neurotic man,
am I a schizo?
a downright wacko?
Oh neurotic man, do I need a shrink?
a punch in the face?
or a cold drink?
Systematic I act
and monotone I be,
can this reality, be all it's cracked up to be?
*yes, I know it may be rough, but I don't care. be honest in your critique as you will, but do not be an asshole. thanks.
but you think that we can
we might as well be dull
we can't swim, let's stand.
Art forms dreams
and dreams form love,
it's not all it seems,
and you've flown above.
Tell me, oh Neurotic man,
am I a schizo?
a downright wacko?
Oh neurotic man, do I need a shrink?
a punch in the face?
or a cold drink?
Systematic I act
and monotone I be,
can this reality, be all it's cracked up to be?
*yes, I know it may be rough, but I don't care. be honest in your critique as you will, but do not be an asshole. thanks.
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