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My love has flu
My love has flu
Said a cuckoo
My love has flu
It is too true
My love has flu
She need a brew
Or perhaps a big bisou
Love, take care of you!
Said a cuckoo
My love has flu
It is too true
My love has flu
She need a brew
Or perhaps a big bisou
Love, take care of you!
Published 8th Oct 2013
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8th Oct 2013 3:14pm
After your love will read this cute poem,i am sure she will be very healthy!I love it!!!
A sweet poem replaces a good pill and with a wonderful side effect : more love.
Thank you for your nice comment, Gaby!
Thank you for your nice comment, Gaby!
Anonymous
8th Oct 2013 3:55pm
What a great way to combine your two former poems, the flu and the bird.
Short but well conveyed, nice, very nice!
Short but well conveyed, nice, very nice!
8th Oct 2013 4:44pm
More and more, I love short poems... But not too much, I don't have success with haïku. And I like to use rhyme for such a poem, it gives a little music in the poem.
Thank you for your comment, Mrs. Vee!
Thank you for your comment, Mrs. Vee!
Anonymous
9th Oct 2013 1:16am
So cute - loved the bisou at the end...
9th Oct 2013 5:06am
12th Oct 2013 00:39am
12th Oct 2013 1:13am
Don't be sorry, nobody obliges you to read my poems, in any case, I have no power to do it and I shall not allow to make it...
