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My lips
I stoped writing
not because I can no longer write
or because
I have nothing to say
it's just
my lips don't wanna speak the truth
and neither does my pen
not because I can no longer write
or because
I have nothing to say
it's just
my lips don't wanna speak the truth
and neither does my pen
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Re: My lips
7th Oct 2013 5:58am
Your lips don't need to write to speak the truth......although I am not sure how quiet you can be about it.....
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Re: My lips
7th Oct 2013 6:01am
Then lie to us, Gigi, tell us a story, we can take it... We're still listening.
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7th Oct 2013 2:23pm
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7th Oct 2013 4:25pm
Re: My lips
7th Oct 2013 8:58pm
Gg it's so good to see you back.. this poem hit me hard with so few words.. peace Crim
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Re: My lips
7th Oct 2013 9:09pm
That's a hard place to be when even the pen doesn't want to write the truth!!!
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Re: My lips
7th Oct 2013 10:43pm
sound like you are going through a bad time. very good small poem. but dont stop writing. and if you do dont stop reading. SENA
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Re: My lips
8th Oct 2013 4:21am
I love this, I think every writer can relate to the feeling you are describing in this piece.
Well written, I enjoyed it.
Well written, I enjoyed it.
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Re: My lips
8th Oct 2013 7:03am
Gigi, Im toying with coming back to writing, Id be sad if one of my favorites has dropped out just as soon as I dropped back in!
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re: Re: My lips
8th Oct 2013 1:21pm
I'm trying art ! It's just kinda hard at the moment . I'm gonna start reading everyone again try and get my mojo back. Hurry up and write something already lol xoxoxo Ty means a lot
Re: My lips
9th Oct 2013 12:35pm
Well if you don't wanna write truth, write about make believe! I'm never concerned about WHAT subject I
write about just that I write! lol
write about just that I write! lol
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Re: My lips
16th Oct 2013 5:45pm
A short write that packs a punch. Ahh the truth can sometimes shake the pen to healing and cleansing the soul. write on let it be gg!
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24th Oct 2013 10:47pm
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Re: My lips
25th Nov 2013 10:17am
Yep, can relate to that; have felt it at times, for sure.
Quick note; change "stoped" to "stopped"
This piece yeah, proof positive that brevity is bravery, and here the risk pays off. Cheers, Gigi
Quick note; change "stoped" to "stopped"
This piece yeah, proof positive that brevity is bravery, and here the risk pays off. Cheers, Gigi
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