Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
6th Oct 2013 1:02am
6th Oct 2013 1:13am
perhaps there should have been
a comma after 'that'....it wasn't goodbye
because he had done a bad thing,
it was simply because he was that sort
of person...
a comma after 'that'....it wasn't goodbye
because he had done a bad thing,
it was simply because he was that sort
of person...
6th Oct 2013 1:14pm
6th Oct 2013 5:10pm
6th Oct 2013 5:01pm
ithink
ithink
ithink
thee lacking comma
adds to thee effective affect of the piece
in that one would
Xpect a comma, and has to stop & say, "wait-a-minute, there should be a comma there"
excuse me....i'll quietly slip back into My Coma.
ithink
ithink
thee lacking comma
adds to thee effective affect of the piece
in that one would
Xpect a comma, and has to stop & say, "wait-a-minute, there should be a comma there"
excuse me....i'll quietly slip back into My Coma.
Remember ... haiku XVII :-).
I had to think
about that,
and at least
extended my vocab
by the word TWAG.
Not bad.
I had to think
about that,
and at least
extended my vocab
by the word TWAG.
Not bad.
6th Oct 2013 6:13pm
6th Oct 2013 6:18pm
7th Oct 2013 00:20am
Well twat is not a nice
word, it first imposed itself
on me in the poems
of John Cooper Clarke,
the punk genius from
Manchester, but it's pretty
universal in the uk now,
I'm afraid..:)
word, it first imposed itself
on me in the poems
of John Cooper Clarke,
the punk genius from
Manchester, but it's pretty
universal in the uk now,
I'm afraid..:)
