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The Call
I am here
waiting for your call
the one that will
let me hear your
beautiful voice
The call that will
make it real
just us talking again
the way we used to
I want to hear from you
want to get that call
will email you once more
to encourage you
I am here waiting
but don't know
if I'll ever get that call
that will change things
from fantasy
to reality
waiting for your call
the one that will
let me hear your
beautiful voice
The call that will
make it real
just us talking again
the way we used to
I want to hear from you
want to get that call
will email you once more
to encourage you
I am here waiting
but don't know
if I'll ever get that call
that will change things
from fantasy
to reality
Published 2nd Oct 2013
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2nd Oct 2013 11:53pm
I can relate do much to this it's not even funny...
This was a real look into I something a lot of ppl no doubt
Know...
This was a real look into I something a lot of ppl no doubt
Know...
3rd Oct 2013 4:36am
I think you are right a lot of people can relate to this.
In the meanwhile I am really hoping he will actually call me....
What's the worst that can happen -- He knows I love him........
In the meanwhile I am really hoping he will actually call me....
What's the worst that can happen -- He knows I love him........
7th Oct 2013 7:07pm
This poem brings back memories from my past,i need to thank you for this poem.I very like it !
7th Oct 2013 10:17pm
It is kind of ironic but this poems brings back memories from the past for me as well --I know he loves me very much, but then as now he prefers to communicate indirectlywith me. Back then I could not fathom why -- nowadays I have a better understanding of why he acts a certain way but still sometimes it is hard and I wish he would just call me already.....
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8th Oct 2013 10:23am
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I believe when a very strong supernatural love is present almost anything is possible...... may I try and should I?
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5th Feb 2014 6:38am
Poets know this feeling all to well. It's these heart shattering moments that push us to points where we can tap into the human condition and really relate to any other broken soul. Keep the great work going. You're a talented gal.
5th Feb 2014 7:40am
Thank you for being so encouraging and able to relate to my poetry.... indeed we poets can be pretty sensitive, which makes us very vulnerable at times, but this sensitivity is often the fountain of our creativity also..... :)
