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He Does, She Does
Precum is building as he strokes his shaft
his hands replaced by your lips in the fantasy
you know he is weaker and accepts fate
he has given in so easily
all those cravings to shag a vivacious vixen
go back to college days
when sadly they thought of him more like a younger brother
reflect on the errors of past ways
Strokes get stronger in knowing that though water separates them
you like the thought of his bad boy standing tall
wants to lower your warmth on it
oh yes that is the most primal of calls
parting your legs as you write on the computer
later in the day where you play and live
your body built for all the he is sharing
not even sure how much sperm can be given
Not quite the same as if live in person
so hoping this isn't about feeding the ego's cry
if it is said he wants to make you forget about your last lover
that certainly would not be a lie
rather have your lips calling his moniker
as cream is thrust into your paradise space
lick and slurp like a content kitten
that way nothing will go to waste
his hands replaced by your lips in the fantasy
you know he is weaker and accepts fate
he has given in so easily
all those cravings to shag a vivacious vixen
go back to college days
when sadly they thought of him more like a younger brother
reflect on the errors of past ways
Strokes get stronger in knowing that though water separates them
you like the thought of his bad boy standing tall
wants to lower your warmth on it
oh yes that is the most primal of calls
parting your legs as you write on the computer
later in the day where you play and live
your body built for all the he is sharing
not even sure how much sperm can be given
Not quite the same as if live in person
so hoping this isn't about feeding the ego's cry
if it is said he wants to make you forget about your last lover
that certainly would not be a lie
rather have your lips calling his moniker
as cream is thrust into your paradise space
lick and slurp like a content kitten
that way nothing will go to waste
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Re: He Does, She Does
1st Oct 2013 2:53pm
Wow..........Jazz! Makes you wonder if our fairer sex will read this and truly understand it's meaning......hmmmmm
Wonderfully reflective write Mr. Manor ; )
Wonderfully reflective write Mr. Manor ; )
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re: Re: He Does, She Does
1st Oct 2013 3:07pm
I will let you know if I get any cyber slaps! Thanks for the comment. Hope all is well with you.
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1st Oct 2013 3:15pm
laugh, I am waiting for him, Woody Harrelson, and Willie Nelson to start a 3rd political party. Think we all know what one of the central issues would be. If Rick James was alive he might be engaged as well. (I am joking here...haven't heard anything about this) I do know Snoop plays a mean game of celebrity football.
Re: He Does, She Does
Anonymous
1st Oct 2013 3:08pm
Well Jazz
It is only sexual physiology
But I am the ????fairer???sex
How would I know.....
Yes, people now lust after people
far away, across the ocean, by just
reading the poem and guess what????
your body responds in kind.....
End of lecture
hmmmmmmmmmmmm
Kitty
It is only sexual physiology
But I am the ????fairer???sex
How would I know.....
Yes, people now lust after people
far away, across the ocean, by just
reading the poem and guess what????
your body responds in kind.....
End of lecture
hmmmmmmmmmmmm
Kitty
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1st Oct 2013 3:22pm
laughing here...our buddy used that term, "fairer sex", not me. When your mother often said she was going to "lacerate your animosity to a floating opportunity", terms like that don't stick in your brain. Plus I have seen females play basketball! (a few of them I even coached)
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1st Oct 2013 8:00pm
Let me know when you get to studying the mind of someone like Charlie Manson. He, the book, and the movie, made me more paranoid (I was 16 when I was introduced to them) then any other time in my life.
But just so you know, there was a reason why I framed the book in the third person! :) I intentionally didn't use "I", so I can use possible deniability.
But just so you know, there was a reason why I framed the book in the third person! :) I intentionally didn't use "I", so I can use possible deniability.
Re: He Does, She Does
1st Oct 2013 7:59pm
Dang it Ted! What has gotten into you lately. Or should I say, what is your pen going through! lol...
"rather have your lips calling his moniker
as cream is thrust into your paradise space
lick and slurp like a content kitten
that way nothing will go to waste" <-Goodness! :)
You need another title hun! Xo
"rather have your lips calling his moniker
as cream is thrust into your paradise space
lick and slurp like a content kitten
that way nothing will go to waste" <-Goodness! :)
You need another title hun! Xo
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1st Oct 2013 8:02pm
Re: He Does, She Does
Anonymous
1st Oct 2013 8:27pm
Nothing wrong with a little sharing between lovers who have no other way to connect. This was good! No cyber-slaps here...
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1st Oct 2013 8:49pm
Re: He Does, She Does
1st Oct 2013 9:23pm
Have to say--I wasn't expecting this rawness from you...welcomed surprise!! and no cyber-slapping today!! :)
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1st Oct 2013 10:09pm
I guess that means I now allowed to play Rick James songs on the guitar rather then John Denver and Pete Seeger? (laughing wildly) Thanks for the comment.
Re: He Does, She Does
1st Oct 2013 10:07pm
Loved this jazz. A great piece of sensuality combined with raw reality.
Love how you dived head first with precum. Lol a brave flamdumkious moment. :). Bravo dear poet.
Love how you dived head first with precum. Lol a brave flamdumkious moment. :). Bravo dear poet.
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2nd Oct 2013 1:01am
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2nd Oct 2013 2:45am
Another sensuously erotic poem by u.....
I love it when u write like that...... :)
I love it when u write like that...... :)
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Re: He Does, She Does
2nd Oct 2013 3:23am
For many it is a power game sadly...like...domination of another kind...control....I've never been a big fan of people being "controlled" but if they TRULY are awake and wish it...good on them, but if it's subtle lead on control...it's harmful and damages good people...my ex was a pro at subtle and submissive control...partial truths...nothings a lie if you only tell the good bits or what is wanted to be heard-Excellent Write Jazz!!!
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6th Oct 2013 4:43pm
at least so had the wisdom to get out of that situation with your ex. Some never do.
Re: He Does, She Does
2nd Oct 2013 4:27am
Wow bro! I see you went all in!! lol n I must say it was a very
real look at how things can be so d never judge one way or the, I say pleasure is pleasure in whatever way you can give n get it! Excellent 'spillage' bro!
real look at how things can be so d never judge one way or the, I say pleasure is pleasure in whatever way you can give n get it! Excellent 'spillage' bro!
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re: Re: He Does, She Does
6th Oct 2013 4:44pm
yes our tendency is to make assumptions about other people's relationships. Only the two involved know the "real deal".