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Our love is burned by the fire of passion
Who knows the love
Knows pain in heart
Who knows the lovers
Knows fire in bodies
Fire need time and care to start in fireplace, as shy
Who loves his lover
Understands the pain
Who loves her lover
Sees fire in her eyes
Flames grow higher in red and yellow colors, as passion
Who lives far to his love
Unable to see her in real
Who talks through a screen
Knows angry in her heart
The wood crackles in the heat of flames, as angry
And reddening twigs jump up out of hearth, as aggressive
Who knows our love
Sees fire in our heart
Who knows our pain
Understands the burn
As love grows older, our hearts mature and
our love becomes as coals, deep-burning and unquenchable
How our love is burned by the fire...
...Of passion...
And all will remember
How our love has been burned
by the fire...
...Of passion...
Inspired by the song of Leonard Cohen "who by the fire"
http://youtu.be/EQTRX23EMNk
And quote of Bruce Lee :
"Love is like a friendship caught on fire. In the beginning a flame, very pretty, often hot and fierce, but still only light and flickering. As love grows older, our hearts mature and our love becomes as coals, deep-burning and unquenchable."
Published 1st Oct 2013
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Anonymous
1st Oct 2013 4:35pm
Wonderful choice on the picture to go with your piece, i love it! and ofcourse the poem itself is a love song well complimenting your inspiration.
1st Oct 2013 4:40pm
Thank you so much, Mrs Vee. I have modified it with all the suggestions, I am not absolutely satisfied by the result, but I wanted to finish it! Perhaps i'll find more inspiration later on this theme!
Anonymous
1st Oct 2013 8:23pm
Love this. Something about a fire burning that brings out the romantic.
I wrote one a while back you might enjoy:
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/113919-dance-with-me/
I wrote one a while back you might enjoy:
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/113919-dance-with-me/
1st Oct 2013 8:56pm
I just discover your poem... Never dare to write this poem if I had seen yours before! It is so nice and musically, really I think it is a very beautiful one.
Mine is more structured, in the sense I need to build a poem like a geometrical structure (you have probably read the quote from Flaubert I like to show). And surely less poetic than yours...
Mine is more structured, in the sense I need to build a poem like a geometrical structure (you have probably read the quote from Flaubert I like to show). And surely less poetic than yours...
Anonymous
1st Oct 2013 9:07pm
No!!!! Don't say that! I loved this one, from the first flicker to the embers!
1st Oct 2013 9:09pm
