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In front of my love, I am like a kid
In front of my love, I am like a kid
When she is angry, I almost cry
Crying for fear of losing her love
My tears come to my eyes
In front of my love, I am like a kid
When she is happy, I almost cry
Crying for happiness by her love
My voice become uneven one
In front of my love, I am like a kid
When she is nude in front of me...
I don't cry, no tears, only tenderness
And more, as you could imagine
Inspired by the song of Georges Brassens : "Je m´suis fait tout p´tit devant un´ poupée" (I made me too small in front of a doll)
When she is angry, I almost cry
Crying for fear of losing her love
My tears come to my eyes
In front of my love, I am like a kid
When she is happy, I almost cry
Crying for happiness by her love
My voice become uneven one
In front of my love, I am like a kid
When she is nude in front of me...
I don't cry, no tears, only tenderness
And more, as you could imagine
Inspired by the song of Georges Brassens : "Je m´suis fait tout p´tit devant un´ poupée" (I made me too small in front of a doll)
Published 29th Sep 2013
| Edited 30th Sep 2013
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Anonymous
29th Sep 2013 10:33pm
I love the love you two share. She must cherish these poems from you.
30th Sep 2013 00:25am
30th Sep 2013 00:02am
30th Sep 2013 00:29am
It was one of the unique poems I write without rhyme and it is easier to write it, probably more heartfelt, spontaneous... Thank you for your comment! Nice one.
Anonymous
30th Sep 2013 1:20am
You should only try to rhyme when it flows easily that way. If you have to hunt, it loses much of the spontaneity of the message you are trying to convey.
30th Sep 2013 5:59am
You are right, PM, but I don't know why in my mind, poesy needs rhyme... perhaps because I have read many poesy with... And I would like to write only sonnets. It is not easy in my native language, harder in english for me.
Anonymous
30th Sep 2013 00:49am
oh wow this is so lovely, there's a child in all of us who wants to be loved unconditionally and we want to please and appease.
What a simple and yet lovely poem, extremely well done Malin!
What a simple and yet lovely poem, extremely well done Malin!
30th Sep 2013 6:00am
1st Oct 2013 10:16pm
Absolutely lovely. If only everyone got their act together and met the one who could encourage their tears by being happy.
Thank you syn
Thank you syn
1st Oct 2013 10:41pm
