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I've Been To Hell
The sun went down,
My eyes turn black,
For the lies that I have told,
The sunshine still prevailed,
To many I am,
Innocent,
Small,
Clueless.
I asked for info,
And it turned into this.
The fact that I am going,
Back to hell,
An empty hell if that.
The demons are here,
Some have mercy others don't.
I have made deals with,
Demons and angels alike.
I'm a slave to many.
But I can save myself.
My eyes turn black,
For the lies that I have told,
The sunshine still prevailed,
To many I am,
Innocent,
Small,
Clueless.
I asked for info,
And it turned into this.
The fact that I am going,
Back to hell,
An empty hell if that.
The demons are here,
Some have mercy others don't.
I have made deals with,
Demons and angels alike.
I'm a slave to many.
But I can save myself.
Published 29th Sep 2013
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Anonymous
30th Oct 2014 9:16pm
Loved this.. These lines are amazing..
The fact that I am going,
Back to hell,
An empty hell if that.
The demons are here,
Some have mercy others don't.
I have made deals with,
Demons and angels alike.
I'm a slave to many.
But I can save myself.
Love the darkened overtones.. But ending on a positive line.. Nice contrast.. I like doing that myself.. Well done..
Dave
The fact that I am going,
Back to hell,
An empty hell if that.
The demons are here,
Some have mercy others don't.
I have made deals with,
Demons and angels alike.
I'm a slave to many.
But I can save myself.
Love the darkened overtones.. But ending on a positive line.. Nice contrast.. I like doing that myself.. Well done..
Dave
31st Oct 2014 1:14am
