deepundergroundpoetry.com
Poker Faced
He took the smile,
right off her mouth.
She has been poker-faced,
and he will not get out.
Silver tears,
stains a face,
with no emotion.
Cold and dead,
vacant eyes,
lack of affection.
Her skin no longer
shines,
and her hair is flat.
She's kicked around,
and treated like a
floor mat.
Her body shrunken,
a breath
that no longer breaths.
She lost all
ability to ever love,
and feel.
No more,
the sun has stop
it's shine.
There's no life
left,
in her deep brown eyes.
A heart,
now shadowed
in black.
Not a sound,
or a beat,
an existence hit the sack.
She has passed,
the level
of screaming for release.
From the moment,
she was silently been,
taken over by the beast.
He took the smile,
right off my mouth.
I was the one who has been poker-faced,
and I've no voice left to shout...[/font]
right off her mouth.
She has been poker-faced,
and he will not get out.
Silver tears,
stains a face,
with no emotion.
Cold and dead,
vacant eyes,
lack of affection.
Her skin no longer
shines,
and her hair is flat.
She's kicked around,
and treated like a
floor mat.
Her body shrunken,
a breath
that no longer breaths.
She lost all
ability to ever love,
and feel.
No more,
the sun has stop
it's shine.
There's no life
left,
in her deep brown eyes.
A heart,
now shadowed
in black.
Not a sound,
or a beat,
an existence hit the sack.
She has passed,
the level
of screaming for release.
From the moment,
she was silently been,
taken over by the beast.
He took the smile,
right off my mouth.
I was the one who has been poker-faced,
and I've no voice left to shout...[/font]
Published 27th Sep 2013
| Edited 28th Sep 2013
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 7
reading list entries 0
comments 12
reads 903
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
28th Sep 2013 6:32am
28th Sep 2013 9:30am
28th Sep 2013 2:39pm
29th Sep 2013 1:26am
29th Sep 2013 00:13am
This was really amazing. I loved all of the metaphors and it really felt like it meant something
29th Sep 2013 1:28am
29th Sep 2013 00:25am
29th Sep 2013 1:30am
Thanks Hades... means a lot.... since I know how much you love Dark Poetry ...
(^,..,^)
(^,..,^)
29th Sep 2013 4:47am
One can't but help notice the battle scars found everywhere in this composition.
13th Dec 2013 12:22pm
Thank You soo much...
and yes.. having the battles scars just makes one's writing even more interesting.
At least that's what I think.
:-)
and yes.. having the battles scars just makes one's writing even more interesting.
At least that's what I think.
:-)
29th Sep 2013 5:44pm
13th Dec 2013 12:24pm
