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K.O.
your words are like
acid gradually corroding
my soul each time you
spit them out
your hissing strikes
my eardrums deafening
me with no delay - not
wasting any time
the poison oozing out
of your mouth paralyzes
me and knocks me out of
my senses
you enjoy seeing me
on the floor laying
next to your feet
with my eyes bleeding
and my heart weeping
begging for your mercy
like a little whore
on crack
I want to super glue
your lips together,
staple them to each
other and stitch them
shut (just in case)
then maybe - just maybe -
I'll finally get some
peace
acid gradually corroding
my soul each time you
spit them out
your hissing strikes
my eardrums deafening
me with no delay - not
wasting any time
the poison oozing out
of your mouth paralyzes
me and knocks me out of
my senses
you enjoy seeing me
on the floor laying
next to your feet
with my eyes bleeding
and my heart weeping
begging for your mercy
like a little whore
on crack
I want to super glue
your lips together,
staple them to each
other and stitch them
shut (just in case)
then maybe - just maybe -
I'll finally get some
peace
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Re: K.O.
Anonymous
26th Sep 2013 8:34pm
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re: Re: K.O.
26th Sep 2013 9:21pm
Hehe,just had to clear my head somehow. And I always need a friend,Theo. Thank you for always being there for me xo
Re: K.O.
Anonymous
26th Sep 2013 8:44pm
Yikes! somebody got up on the wrong side of the bed..hehe
do you need a nap 'Cinth? shall I warn the neighbors to keep the noise down?
A poisonous, spitting, bite from a cotton mouth might be easier to survive.
Hell of a job my friend!
do you need a nap 'Cinth? shall I warn the neighbors to keep the noise down?
A poisonous, spitting, bite from a cotton mouth might be easier to survive.
Hell of a job my friend!
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re: Re: K.O.
26th Sep 2013 9:23pm
Lol. Ah,Tom. You never cease to make me laugh or put a smile on my face. Thank you for that,I needed it. You,my friend,are awesome xo
Re: K.O.
26th Sep 2013 9:09pm
Holy crap on a cracker girl this is one hell of a write... Raw, enraged, empowered and kick ass!
Freaking love It!
Freaking love It!
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re: Re: K.O.
26th Sep 2013 9:34pm
Re: K.O.
Anonymous
26th Sep 2013 10:29pm
Tis the week for vent outs, good job, do it girl, let it all out. This is an excellent scribe Cinth, i love it.
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re: Re: K.O.
26th Sep 2013 11:13pm
Re: K.O.
26th Sep 2013 10:44pm
The spoken word is so powerful as a weapon of destruction. An awesome write.
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Re: K.O.
26th Sep 2013 11:18pm
I like the following imagery,
"your words are like
acid gradually corroding
my soul each time you
spit them out
your hissing strikes
my eardrums deafening
me"
"your words are like
acid gradually corroding
my soul each time you
spit them out
your hissing strikes
my eardrums deafening
me"
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re: Re: K.O.
26th Sep 2013 11:44pm
Re: K.O.
27th Sep 2013 1:12am
Your words your words I tell ya it's easy to pick a fav part, start to finish :)
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re: Re: K.O.
27th Sep 2013 2:33am
Re: K.O.
27th Sep 2013 3:14am
Omg... It is perfectly titled becuz the power of this ink
Knocked me the BLEEP!! Out! lol awesomeness my dear sweetness :)
Knocked me the BLEEP!! Out! lol awesomeness my dear sweetness :)
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Re: K.O.
Anonymous
- Edited 27th Sep 2013 11:13pm
27th Sep 2013 11:12pm
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Re: K.O.
28th Sep 2013 00:19am
Wow... I would hate to be on the receiving end of your verbal lash back... I’m betting you could dish it out and retaliate with relish and gusto... You certainly do it well in writing....If he’s that big of a bully, he’s also a coward...Stand up to him.... Good Luck and support....
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re: Re: K.O.
Haha,my culinary skills are a bit limited :(
Thank you,PoemStranger,for taking the time to read me (:
Thank you,PoemStranger,for taking the time to read me (:
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28th Sep 2013 2:15am
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29th Sep 2013 11:14pm
Lol,totally. And I doubt anyone would suspect me. I've got an innocent face. I could pull it off