Pain

I like this poem. I understand how you feel

yea, it is how I feel most of the time. Like I am suffocating in the loss of texture in my world.

I thought this poem was good. It almost captures the emotions of the reader and overcomes it allowing the reader to connect.
I got a sense of panic from this poem, that could have to do with my personality though.
Nice work.

I try my best to put what I feel in the deepest of words.

Although writing about pain and depression is valuable in that it helps put the pain in perspective and helps vent all kinds of issues, I don't think it's necessarily the best thing to do on a consistent basis because then it becomes such an extention of yourself that becomes so comfortable in your identity which then it is not the best thing--I think.

Like you said, time for a happy poem.  Why not compose a poem describing what it would be like to be happy; at the very least it would be a good exercise.

I have written happy, inspirational poems but my life has kinda got me in a bad mood. It seems that everytime I try to write something upbeat and happy I just can't really find anything. The last happy poem I wrote was kinda messed up because I started getting mad at my Ex-Boyfriend who just told me to have fun with my life. Then he had the nerve to kiss my forehead and leave. Maybe that is the reason that I can't write anything happy. I will put some of my happy poems up, but trust me you will know the last one I wrote was the one that got pretty messed up. I went from all happy and sweet to bitter, violent and really p'd off.

u amaze me with your obvious double personality i like this poem its good :)

thank you.