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The Doctor-1st person
I died in vain,
but relief soon came.
A whole new face
with whole new friends.
Barely recognized by old ones,
but loved by the new.
In the end they all leave,
and once again I am lonely.
Searching for a new companion
that will accept my old friends.
Sometimes I go back
just to see how they are.
But I still move on,
with them forever in my hearts.
but relief soon came.
A whole new face
with whole new friends.
Barely recognized by old ones,
but loved by the new.
In the end they all leave,
and once again I am lonely.
Searching for a new companion
that will accept my old friends.
Sometimes I go back
just to see how they are.
But I still move on,
with them forever in my hearts.
Published 25th Sep 2013
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25th Sep 2013 2:53am
Welcome to DU! How I know this feeling all too well. People go there separate ways for only reasons only they understand at times. Felt this! :)
25th Sep 2013 2:40pm
Welcome! Very good choice for your 1st poem! Glad to see another newbie! ^-^ Keep it up!
26th Sep 2013 10:49pm
Yeah, not a huge fan of the whole, 'Only two poems every eight hours' thing, but it's a good way to express my feelings with nobody in my family knowing how I'm feeling and what I'm hiding.
27th Sep 2013 2:44am
Great scribe my friend. I just want to say you shouldn't have to hide. Atleast here you can be completely open and free.
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