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THE DEAD
When they are no-longer
with us in this life,
those we so much cared for
we see them;
in dreams and visions.
But the dead
maybe think more of us
than we do of them.
with us in this life,
those we so much cared for
we see them;
in dreams and visions.
But the dead
maybe think more of us
than we do of them.
Published 25th Sep 2013
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25th Sep 2013 1:19am
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27th Sep 2013 9:03pm
Line that sticks the most to me:
"But the dead
maybe think more of us
than we do of them."
"But the dead
maybe think more of us
than we do of them."
28th Sep 2013 2:12am
"maybe think more of us"
i like the riddle of the line. the "maybe" still allows the poem to have mystery. leaves the question open to let the answer linger. strong poem from beginning to end.
i like the riddle of the line. the "maybe" still allows the poem to have mystery. leaves the question open to let the answer linger. strong poem from beginning to end.
14th Oct 2015 11:17pm
