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I want you
I want your honesty
I want you sarcasm
I want your sweetness
I want your elegant,skillful hands
I want your honest smile
I want the music that you make
I want your clarity
I want your reason
I want your logic
I want your laid back ways
I want your calm
I want your laugh
I want your gentleness
I want your lips
I want your eyes
I want your voice
I want your heart...
But I can never have these things I want
And being your friend is a bittersweet taunt
I want you sarcasm
I want your sweetness
I want your elegant,skillful hands
I want your honest smile
I want the music that you make
I want your clarity
I want your reason
I want your logic
I want your laid back ways
I want your calm
I want your laugh
I want your gentleness
I want your lips
I want your eyes
I want your voice
I want your heart...
But I can never have these things I want
And being your friend is a bittersweet taunt
Published 22nd Sep 2013
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Ive definitely been in your shoes and its not a good time that's for sure.. Maybe I'm going where I shouldn't but have you told this person how you feel? Heart grasping write by the way.. :)
22nd Sep 2013 3:11am
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22nd Sep 2013 4:46am
The ability to make such a list without the inclination to also go into the short comings says much about your outlook. Sometimes sentences in which "I want" is repeated can come across as obsessive and overbearing. You avoid that here.
22nd Sep 2013 5:02am
i tried to express how afraid i am to compromise what might be the start of a good thing.
22nd Sep 2013 6:32am
Yes blue beast its often a wise thing to step back and take a deep breath to see clearer thats assuming you dont get consumed in regret later in life sometimes its better to find a middle ground to meet halfway
28th Sep 2013 11:10am
I enjoyed the write especially the endinglol. Thanks for stopping by and reading me.
Blake
Blake
8th Oct 2013 1:38pm
