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'Flower'
Hey, ¿alguien ha visto a mi flor?
Me siento tan solo,
extrañarla
uno de cada dos
se siente como horas
Oye me puedes decir
si has visto mi sol?
Sonrío cada vez que
en el pensamiento
podría ser el mío
Anhelante que soy,
como su sonrisa
me whisks distancia
anidado mientras
en un dulce
lugar blando
en su corazón
perdido en
su comodidad
es donde
Quiero sentar ...
~translation~
Hey, has anyone seen my flower?
I feel so alone,
miss her
every second
feels like hours
Hey can you tell me
if you've seen my sun?
I smile every time
in thinking
could be mine
Wistful I am,
as her smile
whisks me away
nested while
in a sweet
soft place
in her heart
lost in
her comfort
is where
I want to lay...
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Re: 'Flower'
Hombre! No he sabido que sabes hablar español! Un poema desarollado cuidadamente y con mucha espesura! Me encanta!
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20th Sep 2013 1:27pm
Aaaaawwww well I don't speak it well, I speak a lil bit... Learned it as a kid n forgot alot after all these years of not using it much... I had a needed lil help, STILL it is DEF. my words as always lol...gracias mi amiaga!
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20th Sep 2013 1:15pm
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20th Sep 2013 1:28pm
Aaaaawwww my sweetheart, sure I will... Hold on, I'll add the translation :)
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20th Sep 2013 3:38pm
So glad you added the translation! I am taking a class in Spanish now but I had no clue what this was... lol ^-^ / :/
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20th Sep 2013 4:49pm
Thank you, n ur welcome I realize that sometimes
I need to make all options available in a post that I can. Appreciate u :)
I need to make all options available in a post that I can. Appreciate u :)
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20th Sep 2013 3:48pm
this was amazing. I am still learning Spanish but thanks for the translation. I was differently a different way to write a poem but good ink my friend. :)
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20th Sep 2013 4:50pm
So sweet you are :) n yea different, that's me! lol
Appreciate ur support lady :)
Appreciate ur support lady :)
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Anonymous
20th Sep 2013 4:23pm
Very sweet indeed...:)
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Anonymous
20th Sep 2013 7:10pm
and as the song goes...'Aint no sunshine when she's gone...', well crafted Mr. PIKM, beautiful and touching!
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20th Sep 2013 8:21pm
Yup Aint it tha truth! Thank you for your wonderful n continuous support my friend, truly appreciate that n you :)
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20th Sep 2013 9:27pm
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21st Sep 2013 2:32am
Speak English first! Eng'lish! lmbo....Had a sista like; "what da hell?!" :)
This was Awesome! I loved how you translated it! Xo
This was Awesome! I loved how you translated it! Xo
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21st Sep 2013 4:33am
Que? No hablo engles lol yea I know it started out strange
But hey where's the fun in giving away what I saying right from the outset? lol thank u my dear! Appreciate u muchly :)
But hey where's the fun in giving away what I saying right from the outset? lol thank u my dear! Appreciate u muchly :)