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'Honey, Be...'
Hypnotically attractive,
She's got that "it"
I think, maybe
that'd be my babygirl
to this life she's instrumental,
as she's rocked my world
can't quite put a finger,
define that 'fine her'
a treasure, I'd like I find her
Stacked like a billionaire's money
she got that honey, such a sweet baby
I wanna stick her with my 'stinger'
a beauty that exudes from within,
thankful to he, I'd be that to me if he'd bring her...
She's got that "it"
I think, maybe
that'd be my babygirl
to this life she's instrumental,
as she's rocked my world
can't quite put a finger,
define that 'fine her'
a treasure, I'd like I find her
Stacked like a billionaire's money
she got that honey, such a sweet baby
I wanna stick her with my 'stinger'
a beauty that exudes from within,
thankful to he, I'd be that to me if he'd bring her...
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Re: 'Honey, Be...'
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- Edited 16th Sep 2013 10:48pm
16th Sep 2013 10:47pm
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16th Sep 2013 11:05pm
Lol nah, just a lil silly dreamin going on bro. BUT I admit SHE
would be a dream woman to have lol thanks a ton for all ur support :)
would be a dream woman to have lol thanks a ton for all ur support :)
Re: 'Honey, Be...'
16th Sep 2013 10:49pm
Okay now, ENOUGH of talkin bout me and where you wanna' put your stinger. hahaha....
...couldn't help it, the door was wide open! I'm such a goofy clown! Adorable Ink hun....Xo
...couldn't help it, the door was wide open! I'm such a goofy clown! Adorable Ink hun....Xo
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16th Sep 2013 11:06pm
But I thought u said it was ok to floss all over u! lol
n Hhmmm where oh where shall my stinger go?? Hhhmmm lol
thank you my silly, but sexy lady... Truly adore n appreciate you! :)
n Hhmmm where oh where shall my stinger go?? Hhhmmm lol
thank you my silly, but sexy lady... Truly adore n appreciate you! :)
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16th Sep 2013 11:11pm
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16th Sep 2013 11:47pm
Mmmmm anything that gets you thinking yummy makes me feel proud, my super yummy friend! lol
Thank u so much, I'm truly grateful for your support :)
Thank u so much, I'm truly grateful for your support :)
Re: 'Honey, Be...'
Anonymous
17th Sep 2013 12:03pm
ooohhh, a twisty little write..magical and heavy-this one seems to be hiding sooo much!
bravo, poet!
bravo, poet!
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re: Re: 'Honey, Be...'
17th Sep 2013 12:43pm
Well hiding only the identity becuz
I don't know WHO yet, just know I want a special, unconditional love lol... Thank you my sweet dear lady
appreciate you so much :)
I don't know WHO yet, just know I want a special, unconditional love lol... Thank you my sweet dear lady
appreciate you so much :)
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17th Sep 2013 12:49pm
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18th Sep 2013 8:07pm
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17th Sep 2013 3:56pm
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18th Sep 2013 8:09pm
Lol uhm yea... Buzzzzz pow! lol oops my bad, I poked u too hard lol thank u sweetie! :)
Re: 'Honey, Be...'
17th Sep 2013 4:53pm
'Honey, Be'
Aww,the poem is so sweeet...like honey :P (excuse my not so funny sense of humour ^_^)
Lovely lovely write :D
Aww,the poem is so sweeet...like honey :P (excuse my not so funny sense of humour ^_^)
Lovely lovely write :D
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re: Re: 'Honey, Be...'
18th Sep 2013 8:10pm
No need to be sorry I think ur sense of humor is sweet n adorable :) thank u my dear! :)
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17th Sep 2013 6:20pm
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18th Sep 2013 8:11pm
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18th Sep 2013 7:58pm
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18th Sep 2013 8:12pm
Absolutely correct my friend! I do have a sweet tooth n I'm always wanting my 'candy' lol I thank u tons my dear :)
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18th Sep 2013 8:27pm
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18th Sep 2013 8:35pm
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18th Sep 2013 8:11pm
"thankful to he, I'd be that to me if he'd bring her..." She'll come! Just be ready with that stinger...well not toooo ready!! lol :)
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18th Sep 2013 8:23pm
Lmao okie! I won't be TOO ready lol but I do thank u much my sweet friend :) appreciate all ur support always :)
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