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This girl, is she me?
This girl lives in a fairytale.
To far for us to tell.
She is pretty like a princess.
Has the mind of peter pan.
Like a mermaid she is graceful.
Advantage of her is taken.
Like the beginning of Cinderella.
One day she will become what truly is.
Something that she is becoming.
Will she find her prince?
Or will the clock strike 12?
Will her daddy keep her underwater?
Or will true love set her free?
Will her mother be so proud?
Or make her do the chores?
Will her best friends still be there?
Well she dosnt really have any.
Will she have a kid, and be a mother?
Or just mother the world.
Will she become evil, like her step mom?
Or be stopped in her path?
This girl, she is very different..
This girl, Is she me???.....
To far for us to tell.
She is pretty like a princess.
Has the mind of peter pan.
Like a mermaid she is graceful.
Advantage of her is taken.
Like the beginning of Cinderella.
One day she will become what truly is.
Something that she is becoming.
Will she find her prince?
Or will the clock strike 12?
Will her daddy keep her underwater?
Or will true love set her free?
Will her mother be so proud?
Or make her do the chores?
Will her best friends still be there?
Well she dosnt really have any.
Will she have a kid, and be a mother?
Or just mother the world.
Will she become evil, like her step mom?
Or be stopped in her path?
This girl, she is very different..
This girl, Is she me???.....
Published 3rd Jan 2011
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16th Jan 2011 00:17am
Anonymous
11th May 2011 3:17pm
Many Disney references in this poem. I take it to be a commentary on society and how a girl who grows up today sees herself in the guise of the many characters she dreams about from the Disney films, and on, and on, etc. I liked this piece. Good work.
