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skin
down by the river
in full sunlight
your tan lines
maps to explore
tracing the contours
of your body
I do not know
where my hand
ends and your
skin begins
in full sunlight
your tan lines
maps to explore
tracing the contours
of your body
I do not know
where my hand
ends and your
skin begins
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Re: skin
15th Sep 2013 5:11pm
Perhaps there's no ending and no beginning, just a melting ... Love that poem!
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15th Sep 2013 5:15pm
Re: skin
15th Sep 2013 5:33pm
As like a sun-goddess herself--to be worshiped by such adoring hands....
Such sweet, subtle sensuality, my friend. <3
Such sweet, subtle sensuality, my friend. <3
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re: Re: skin
15th Sep 2013 8:53pm
Re: skin
15th Sep 2013 8:16pm
Provokes thoughts of absolute wonder of another's anatomy.
Perfection, jag :)
Perfection, jag :)
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re: Re: skin
15th Sep 2013 8:54pm
Re: skin
Anonymous
15th Sep 2013 10:14pm
Just lovely, sensual....
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Re: skin
Anonymous
15th Sep 2013 11:03pm
This one made my skin tingle...
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16th Sep 2013 5:11pm
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15th Sep 2013 11:05pm
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16th Sep 2013 5:12pm
Re: skin
Anonymous
16th Sep 2013 1:10am
just exquisite jagracia!
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16th Sep 2013 5:13pm
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16th Sep 2013 5:14pm
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17th Sep 2013 3:38am
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17th Sep 2013 4:17pm
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17th Sep 2013 9:45pm
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18th Sep 2013 3:38am
You are welcome. I knew you would do beautifully with the idea. Hmmm......how about you write on laughter?
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18th Sep 2013 3:48am