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reading her mind…
what am I thinking she asked,
as she looked into my eyes -
you’re thinking we won’t last I said,
her tears
all the in-sight
I needed...
as she looked into my eyes -
you’re thinking we won’t last I said,
her tears
all the in-sight
I needed...
Published 14th Sep 2013
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14th Sep 2013 5:42am
Beautifully sad. And your artwork captures it completely. I see fear in her eye. Or maybe that's my interpretation of it.
Nicely written, jag .
Nicely written, jag .
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Anonymous
14th Sep 2013 10:19am
You pack much into your sweet poetry jagracia!
Strider...
Strider...
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14th Sep 2013 9:54pm
You know, it's the little sweet and sad poems that go straight to the heart. This one went marrow-deep.
14th Sep 2013 11:57pm
Anonymous
14th Sep 2013 11:34pm
So sweet, endearing. The artistic
picture fits nicely as well...
picture fits nicely as well...
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