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A girl in a sunflower's field
Sunflower, splendid and brightly flower
Which many people dream to be owner
And each has a theory about your manner
To watch always the sun now and forever
Sunflower, splendid and brightly flower
How could you accept to become loser
Because a girl, nice model, comes here
Beside you to take many nice pictures
Sunflower, splendid and brightly flower
How could you accept the beauty of her
Hides your own beauty intensive, inner
Don't be upset by her, she's not invader
Sunflower, splendid and brightly flower
Appreciate her coming to make picture
To promote as could do good illustrator
Accept that the girl and you are the better
Sunflower, splendid and brightly flower
Never see more beautiful pictures of her
Because you are, Sunflower, together
Splendid images, wonderfully, forever
Which many people dream to be owner
And each has a theory about your manner
To watch always the sun now and forever
Sunflower, splendid and brightly flower
How could you accept to become loser
Because a girl, nice model, comes here
Beside you to take many nice pictures
Sunflower, splendid and brightly flower
How could you accept the beauty of her
Hides your own beauty intensive, inner
Don't be upset by her, she's not invader
Sunflower, splendid and brightly flower
Appreciate her coming to make picture
To promote as could do good illustrator
Accept that the girl and you are the better
Sunflower, splendid and brightly flower
Never see more beautiful pictures of her
Because you are, Sunflower, together
Splendid images, wonderfully, forever
Published 14th Sep 2013
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Anonymous
14th Sep 2013 11:52pm
Malin my friend, i absolutely love the idea for the poem. Resentment, jealousy of another beauty invading their space.
Few grammatical errors here and there, but you're doing better, much better, im proud of you :)
Few grammatical errors here and there, but you're doing better, much better, im proud of you :)
15th Sep 2013 2:11am
Anonymous
15th Sep 2013 2:03am
This is a wonderful poem. I wrote one where the girl in question needs to be more like a sunflower:
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/119302-sunflower-days/
This is a look from the other side... beautifully done, cher.
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/119302-sunflower-days/
This is a look from the other side... beautifully done, cher.
15th Sep 2013 2:14am
I just discover your poem, so nice... another point of view of a girl with sunflowers. Thank you for your comment. But you'll discover the prose, I should link to this poem, hope you'll like it...
