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Suicide Note
To You,
This is my last call. Making my exit because you let me fall. Time and time again, I said I wanted to be alone. All I really wanted was for you to pick up the phone. Sometimes it all becomes too much; becomes subliminal, hard to touch. For me, tangibility is a necessity. Without it, life would not be itself. Due this, I mutilate myself. Not for you, not for him; Simply because my life is so dim. No more light at the end of the road. For me, I needed someone to hold. No longer I give in to you, Now I give in to fate. Standing no more, I make my escape. It'll be okay since I was never really anything at all. Please tell Mom this is not her fault. I know you never thought I'd end it this way. I'm too depressed, what can I say? When I'm gone, I know you'll carry on. Give all my belongings to my friends. Not long and I'll be invisible again. So I say goodbye to those I love, it's time for me to rise above.
I Love You Forever,
Kirsten
This is my last call. Making my exit because you let me fall. Time and time again, I said I wanted to be alone. All I really wanted was for you to pick up the phone. Sometimes it all becomes too much; becomes subliminal, hard to touch. For me, tangibility is a necessity. Without it, life would not be itself. Due this, I mutilate myself. Not for you, not for him; Simply because my life is so dim. No more light at the end of the road. For me, I needed someone to hold. No longer I give in to you, Now I give in to fate. Standing no more, I make my escape. It'll be okay since I was never really anything at all. Please tell Mom this is not her fault. I know you never thought I'd end it this way. I'm too depressed, what can I say? When I'm gone, I know you'll carry on. Give all my belongings to my friends. Not long and I'll be invisible again. So I say goodbye to those I love, it's time for me to rise above.
I Love You Forever,
Kirsten
Published 2nd Jan 2011
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5th Jan 2011 1:18am
7th Jan 2011 3:36am
it seems simple but is a very cool viewpoint to write from ( not to condone suicide DONT DO IT !)
might have to write my own suicide note could be interesting .?.?.?.?./ :)
might have to write my own suicide note could be interesting .?.?.?.?./ :)
1st Mar 2011 1:16am
I had never thought to use this as a poem form either, until one of my friends tried it. I found it very amusing to try, I'm sure you would also.
13th Mar 2011 5:29pm
This is amazing and interesting all in its own... simply, beautiful ... like said ( not condoning suicide )....
