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Question do you spit or do you swallow?

She said damn baby let me suck your dick      
So I asked her a question, do you spit or do you swallow?  
she said what does that have anything to do with it      
I have never swallowed your nut, so why all of a sudden you asking about it      
 
With a smile on my face, I answered, Shiiiiiiiiiiiiiid, errthang!
     
let me explain      
you can have a good head game      
suck a dick so good you'd drive a dude insane      
sound effects, sloppy joe, deep throat and all that mess      
have a dude spend his paycheck on you, well, cause your heads the best      
so I proceeded to tell her the story about my ex      
     
see baby I heard my man left his new chick to go back to his ex      
and I was wondering why, saying to myself damn homey that's the wrong flex      
but he got his reasons pretty simple huh, not too complex      
she said, really, but you said old girl was straight tho right      
cooks and cleans, fitness on point, gorgeous, body tight      
why would he leave such a freaking hottie, an incredible sight      
     
well I asked him to meet me one day to find out what's up      
he explains yeah she's all of that but it just wasn't enough      
I'm shaking my head like yo what the fuck      
he asked me do you want to know why I gave all that up      
I reply yeah man, I want to know what's up      
then he swears me to secrecy he's willing to share cause I'm his best homey      
are you serious dude, or are you fucking with me      
be at my crib at 9pm he said, you'll see      
     
9pm comes around I'm sitting on his couch he said be back in 30 and he leaves the house      
his girls walks into the room kneels between my legs takes my cock out and puts it in her mouth      
she starts sucking, and slurping, deep throating and moaning      
grabbing her head squirming cause this shit feels amazing
She slide her tongue up and down the bottom of my shaft
OMG! it felt so good, shit was off the charts
10 minutes in and I start to erupt, to my surprise my cock still in her mouth      
she sucks me like a straw my body wiggles like rubber      
she keeps on sucking til all the cum comes out in a sputter      
then sticks out her tongue to show there is not one drip left, that's right none
tongue ring shining flashing a flare like the midday sun    
then she kisses the head with one loud sweet pucker      
I punched the couch screaming you one bad motherfucker.      
     
20 min later my man comes back gives me a nod and say see you later, that's my dude for life, there's no one greater      
I hopped, skipped, and jumped around smiling cause I never had that done, and now I'm sprung      
just how good it felt, is what I want from now on and nothing less,  
all this time I thought I had experienced the best      
     
I called my then girl on the phone and said baby I'm not coming home      
     
Never!    
   
Ever!    
     
question do you spit or do you swallow?
Written by thewatcher33
Published | Edited 8th May 2023
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