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"So, who are YOU, exactly … ???" ... A Poem written by Big Virge 8/9/2013
So, who are YOU, exactly ?
Lil' Ms. Fatty ?
who claims to be happy ?
Well, some of the time
I see you asking bout mine,
but, what's your design ?
Your online profile
is all about smiles
and a jokey side
So your calling my name
and, trying to claim
that I hide another side
Now, that's not nice !
and is a slippery slide
to where we, collide !
I guess it's what you wanted
Well, okay, now you've got it !
You've already conceded
Defeat, to me
because of extremities
in my speech,
that, you didn't see
and it seems, could not believe !
I'll leave your name out
"Again", so don't doubt,
that, you've achieved, "Nothing",
So, Listen up luv,
Just Stop ya' frontin' !!!
You're enough as you are ?
Don't make me laugh !!!
I feel disrespected !
So, here's a poem
I've swiftly, ejected !
See, this, I enjoy !!!
Exhibiting the poise
with which I move
You should learn to, boo !!!
Aren't we done yet ?
Why's my name in your forum threads ?
As if doing these things,
will, give you something ?
like, support from those
who like how your roll
Well me, I DON'T.
Our boat has sunk !
without, "The Fun",
you claim to, "Love", ?
I told you straight
you're not, my type !
Well, maybe for a stand ?
but, just for, one night !
because infantile minds
who seem to like games
and, calling out names !
That's, all on you babe
I'll just walk away
Now, don't be rude
calm your, "attitude",
cos' i've got one too !
that isn't, " so cool ",
and may cause me to get,
all up in your head ?
with lyrics that, wet
Yup, just like, "Judge Dread"
and I really have locks !
that may leave ya, knocked !
THANK YOU, for the plug !
but, arrogant luv ?
Cut out, that stuff !
I'm glad you think i'm, "Goodest"
It's true, my style is, fluent !!!
and, better than most !
and that's, no boast !
So, ease off the quotes,
that, clearly show,
that your tell, is more, " Ho' "
So, i'm calling time
with this rhyme, storyline
If you've got questions
send a, "private message !"
just make sure it contains
more than, one phrase !
because I just don't have
the time to waste !
Now, i'm just saying that,
so there's, NO REPLAYS !
This Here, is just, "Proof"
that, I LOVE, what I do !!!
See, this to me, is FUN !!!
i'm, laughing at you now
girls like you, I stun !!!
by just, breaking you down
Reply, if you like !
but you should, think twice
What ya gonna say ?
"I knew he'd reply !
and prove to this, Whole Site !!!
that he's a bitch, who couldn't get wid'
"THIS", online bike for guys
who like a, "Crazy Ride !!!"
with a mother, who implies
she likes, "Rough Sex !",
and, "Other Things", in,
Every other line !
I've seen you come !
I've seen you go !
girls like you,
Now Known as, "NOPE !!!"
Name calling,
is what, YOU DO ?!?,
it seems our, "Poetry Battle"
was beyond, what you could handle ?
so, no more dots, or, periods
cos', these words here, are SERIOUS !
calling me a, "Nigga"
Now that's just, "NOT COOL !!!"
I guess I should of figured,
that this is how you move ?
Let me guess ?
It was a, "Joke"
Well, check this yo !
I let that, go !
But now, let me say
THAT AIN"T OKAY !!!
You don't know me !
and should now, cease
from calling my name
for all to see !!!!!
cos maybe, that was, "Racist ?",
or, is it that, you're, "Basic ?",
and simply, cannot face it !
Your insecurity, Defines You !
while me baby, believe, "I'm cool !"
I don't do, "Trashy"
or, "Lil Miss Fattys"
with, "Beat Up Chassis"
Your jokes are, "Shabby"
and so, "Ms. Crassly"
Let me, "Flip the script'
and ask you, "THIS ?"
"So, who are YOU, exactly ?"
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