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Confidence and Trust
I didn't see him;
wasn't waiting;
I
wasn't there
to see his stallion
white
Against
my
dancing dress;
Black
I didn't see;
see
his hands pushing onwards
direct
knowing
confident;
I wasn't there
to
see
him
swaying me
Leading me
taking me
there and back;
I didn't see;
But;
if I had
it would have been
as I've just said.
wasn't waiting;
I
wasn't there
to see his stallion
white
Against
my
dancing dress;
Black
I didn't see;
see
his hands pushing onwards
direct
knowing
confident;
I wasn't there
to
see
him
swaying me
Leading me
taking me
there and back;
I didn't see;
But;
if I had
it would have been
as I've just said.
Published 9th Sep 2013
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9th Sep 2013 5:29pm
ahhh, but you felt it, all the way!! :)
Nice choice of image to go with it, great job!
Nice choice of image to go with it, great job!
9th Sep 2013 5:38pm
Was looking for a nice black number
but this just stole it for me
though she was wearing black
formal evening dress not dancing
but close enough
yes Vee thats what it was about
you don't have to be in his arms to know and feel
what it's like to dance up close and personal
though hehe i would much like to be in leonardos arms he can paint me anyday!
but this just stole it for me
though she was wearing black
formal evening dress not dancing
but close enough
yes Vee thats what it was about
you don't have to be in his arms to know and feel
what it's like to dance up close and personal
though hehe i would much like to be in leonardos arms he can paint me anyday!
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9th Sep 2013 5:43pm
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9th Sep 2013 7:47pm
I love the motion in this piece...as stated before it is elegant as in a dream of what romance can be. I love the Kate and Leo pic too :)
9th Sep 2013 7:49pm
9th Sep 2013 8:27pm
I see the words of your title, & also desire & slight reluctance. I see it in your poem, I see it in their faces. your poem sways like a slow dance...
9th Sep 2013 8:30pm
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Anonymous
10th Sep 2013 3:17am
You are growing poetically every day. It's a pleasure to read.
10th Sep 2013 5:40am
