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Starry
The starry skies on starry nights
Bind my sight in starry lights
My starry eyes sheen no delight
How her starry lies take to flight
Starry cries that keep her blind
And starry ties do creep, entwine
Starry times and starry lines
They marionette her starry mind
Home behind the rooting bars
She opens up her shooting scars
Safe from streets of shooting cars
Underneath the shooting stars
Strangers cheat on shooting darts
And light below their shoot cigars
Wrapped inside polluting arms
She never meant to shoot so far
Published 9th Sep 2013
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Anonymous
9th Sep 2013 5:40pm
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9th Sep 2013 6:24pm
Thanks, Theo! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I'll definitely be here to stay :)
I don't know why,but there was such a cute element to that. I really enjoyed the read hey. Welcome to DUP (:
We want moooore!! :D
We want moooore!! :D
9th Sep 2013 7:44pm
Haha, not what I was aiming for, but now that I reread it, I kinda get an adoration vibe :) Thank you very much, and more is on the way ^_^
9th Sep 2013 8:34pm
Hehe,don't worry. I got the deeper meaning of the poem. Speaking about poems, wouldn't you like to write a poem about a tree? For a worthy cause? It would mean a lot to my friend and many DUP tree-lovers...
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/5727/
You can post it there (:
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/5727/
You can post it there (:
9th Sep 2013 8:45pm
Absolutely, you picked the right person to ask :) I'll get right to it ^_^
9th Sep 2013 9:10pm
