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Body
you melt in me
bring comfort to me
fill me up
with peace
and love
cover me in joy
inside
and out
you warm my heart
satisfy my soul
you melt in me
bring comfort to me
fill me up
with peace
and love
cover me in joy
inside
and out
you warm my heart
satisfy my soul
you melt in me
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Anonymous
9th Sep 2013 4:14am
Simple, quiet and elegant, melts together so well.
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Anonymous
9th Sep 2013 5:52am
Very loving, very tender, very nice write
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9th Sep 2013 1:31pm
Aaahhh I see you went n got all
Don Juan on us here huh? lol
jk of course, this is truly serene n sweet dude. :)
Don Juan on us here huh? lol
jk of course, this is truly serene n sweet dude. :)
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13th Sep 2013 1:07am
You master what I always have trouble with; the short and concise poem that still has the uttermost impact. Can't let this one pass; was the Bob Marley line intentional? (satisfy my soul)
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13th Sep 2013 1:50am
Thank you kindly my friend...no Marley influence today but one of my favorite all time songs is "No Women No Cry"...peace and love :)
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13th Sep 2013 1:09am
Anonymous
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