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Death, the Sweet release of (draft)
future madness but right
now I'm just glad to be out-
ta this in spirit. I was
tired 'a all this fear it brings sad-
ness. . . . if the
glass in the mirror breaks I'll
still be asking to had
at it, have at all the
bits and reflections and past
habits passed down from gene-
rations of my feelings and a
growing insecurity that
magic has a way of disguis-
ing itself as a dependen-
cy and it's tragic cuz in the
end all I wanted was lasting
love
now I'm just glad to be out-
ta this in spirit. I was
tired 'a all this fear it brings sad-
ness. . . . if the
glass in the mirror breaks I'll
still be asking to had
at it, have at all the
bits and reflections and past
habits passed down from gene-
rations of my feelings and a
growing insecurity that
magic has a way of disguis-
ing itself as a dependen-
cy and it's tragic cuz in the
end all I wanted was lasting
love
Published 7th Sep 2013
| Edited 10th Sep 2013
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19th Dec 2013 00:50am
"I'll
still be asking to had
at it" - not right - I liked the concept of passing down habits and reflection of your former self and the line "magic has a way of disguis-
ing itself as a dependen-
cy" was good stuff sounds like a drug addiction poem rather than lyrics
still be asking to had
at it" - not right - I liked the concept of passing down habits and reflection of your former self and the line "magic has a way of disguis-
ing itself as a dependen-
cy" was good stuff sounds like a drug addiction poem rather than lyrics
