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Traversing Oceanic Seascapes
I swam in an ocean
filled with open rays
smelling the current
as it carried me away
turning to lie upon my back
blinded perfect by a moment
seeing shapes emblazon
the minds sky directed heading
kites with tails soar over
swooping through like dragons
breathing hot fires surveying
clutched pearls held in protection
as I sigh content
just floating along
where waves swell and fall
trusting the ocean to move
under the heavens
where I can be dazzled
by morning and night time stars
travelling
filled with open rays
smelling the current
as it carried me away
turning to lie upon my back
blinded perfect by a moment
seeing shapes emblazon
the minds sky directed heading
kites with tails soar over
swooping through like dragons
breathing hot fires surveying
clutched pearls held in protection
as I sigh content
just floating along
where waves swell and fall
trusting the ocean to move
under the heavens
where I can be dazzled
by morning and night time stars
travelling
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6th Sep 2013 3:54am
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This was wonderful imagery Soul , so much so that I felt a bit sea sick. I love when you take me down a path of visual wandering
thank you
G
thank you
G
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6th Sep 2013 2:17pm
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6th Sep 2013 2:14pm
The beautiful kite complements perfectly with your
creative imagination of a perfect seascape...another great projection of imagery Soul! Enjoyed the read...
creative imagination of a perfect seascape...another great projection of imagery Soul! Enjoyed the read...
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6th Sep 2013 2:16pm
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Anonymous
6th Sep 2013 2:40pm
quite simply beautiful mr soul...greatly enjoyed your word flow!
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6th Sep 2013 4:12pm
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Anonymous
6th Sep 2013 2:59pm
souladareatease,
Floating upon an ocean of dreams you are!
tornado
Floating upon an ocean of dreams you are!
tornado
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6th Sep 2013 4:13pm
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7th Sep 2013 7:59am
I have been meaning to more, but it has been rather difficult as of late.
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8th Sep 2013 1:53am
no worries no hurries My friend...time is always a bitch :) catch it as You can and be selfish with it;)
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12th Sep 2013 8:19pm
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13th Sep 2013 1:02am
Awwwwww Thank You:) I Missed You Dear Rain-Welcome back :D This was my "letting out a deep exhale" Write hehehehe they aren't always often enough!!!