deepundergroundpoetry.com
I Still...
I still dream...
about what it would be like
to taste the breath of her kiss
the soft, plump,
sweetness of her lips
I still dream...
of how her face would feel
cupped in my hands,
such beauty to behold,
makes my mind reel...
I still dream...
of her voice so warmly tender
overflowing with love so sweet
her whispers of surreal pleasuring
resonate in mind,
and knocks me off my feet
I still dream...
about our bodies
tying our souls together,
tethered to a reality
as we grew, we'd only get better
I still dream...
that she never left my side,
because she knew within the beats
of my heart was exactly where she'd reside...
about what it would be like
to taste the breath of her kiss
the soft, plump,
sweetness of her lips
I still dream...
of how her face would feel
cupped in my hands,
such beauty to behold,
makes my mind reel...
I still dream...
of her voice so warmly tender
overflowing with love so sweet
her whispers of surreal pleasuring
resonate in mind,
and knocks me off my feet
I still dream...
about our bodies
tying our souls together,
tethered to a reality
as we grew, we'd only get better
I still dream...
that she never left my side,
because she knew within the beats
of my heart was exactly where she'd reside...
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 15
reading list entries 5
comments 30
reads 1246
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Re: I Still...
Anonymous
- Edited 4th Sep 2013 11:24pm
4th Sep 2013 11:23pm
<< post removed >>
re: Re: I Still...
5th Sep 2013 00:14am
Aaahhh yea, I know you dream much like myself bro...ALOT lol
but hey, that's probably how we get our best poetry huh? I thank you n may the ink always pour for you ;)
but hey, that's probably how we get our best poetry huh? I thank you n may the ink always pour for you ;)
Re: I Still...
Anonymous
4th Sep 2013 11:25pm
Love this. Beautiful wording. Beautiful dream, my friend! Great stuff! :-)
Peace
Carlene
Peace
Carlene
0
re: Re: I Still...
5th Sep 2013 00:17am
I'm happy you do my sweet Charlene! Thank u so much dear lady, appreciate you always :)
Re: I Still...
4th Sep 2013 11:28pm
Sometimes we have to make our dreams come true. Emotionally deep and sensual write, Poe!
Chi
Chi
0
re: Re: I Still...
5th Sep 2013 00:18am
Yea, I agree n hey if I could, I'd make ALL my dreams come true! lol... Appreciate n thank you profusely :)
Re: I Still...
4th Sep 2013 11:35pm
re: Re: I Still...
5th Sep 2013 00:26am
Thank you, I'm sure many do... Appreciate ur time n thoughts n shall return the favor soon :)
Re: I Still...
4th Sep 2013 11:42pm
re: Re: I Still...
5th Sep 2013 00:28am
Thank you Anita for your tenderness n support gives me the drive to keep on doing what I do :) grateful as always to you lady!
Re: I Still...
5th Sep 2013 00:52am
I dream of more amazing poetry like this :) This is beautiful <3 I enjoyed reading it a lot. Keep going deary.
0
re: Re: I Still...
5th Sep 2013 3:09am
Aaaawwww well then maybe u should go thru some of my earlier posts, I'm sure u will find some more similar becuz I'm a dreamer if I'm nothing else lol thank u for this very sweet comment, I truly appreciate it :)
Re: I Still...
5th Sep 2013 1:05am
Sensual, beautiful...on the edge of my seat wondering what will happen when you dream again :) Great pen, honey!
0
re: Re: I Still...
5th Sep 2013 3:11am
C'mere n let me give u a big hug! lol
Thank you so much, you have planted a very big smile on my grill! lol truly appreciate you lady :)
Thank you so much, you have planted a very big smile on my grill! lol truly appreciate you lady :)
Re: I Still...
Anonymous
5th Sep 2013 1:20am
What a great love poem. Sensual, sexy and intimate. Great!!! :)
0
re: Re: I Still...
5th Sep 2013 3:12am
Thank you my dear! Truly grateful for all the support n kind words always :)
Re: I Still...
Anonymous
5th Sep 2013 3:10am
Warm and inviting words. Lucky the woman who finds you and knows.
0
re: Re: I Still...
5th Sep 2013 3:14am
Listen to your sweetness spilling out! Thank you my sexy lil sweetie pie, n I'd be lucky to have that someone too! lol
Appreciate u much :)
Appreciate u much :)
Re: I Still...
5th Sep 2013 6:20am
This is truly beautiful.. each word is felt !!
So pure feelings/dreams :) I so loved it that had no option than to add it to my reading :)
0
re: Re: I Still...
5th Sep 2013 10:18am
Aaaawwww n with that you have truly honored me! A million thank yous my sweet beauty! Truly, I'm humbled n very grateful for your comment n support :)
Re: I Still...
5th Sep 2013 2:16pm
this was Absolutely Beautiful :)
"I still dream...
about our bodies
tying our souls together,
tethered to a reality
as we grew, we'd only get better " ahhh breathtaking!!! enjoyed!
"I still dream...
about our bodies
tying our souls together,
tethered to a reality
as we grew, we'd only get better " ahhh breathtaking!!! enjoyed!
0
re: Re: I Still...
5th Sep 2013 2:47pm
Aaaawwww my sweet sweet friend u always touch me with your words n Neverending support... Thank you sooooo much! :)
Re: I Still...
Anonymous
5th Sep 2013 3:44pm
So beautifully written, romantic,
captured love unconditional...
Fave Lines:I still dream...
about our bodies
tying our souls together,
tethered to a reality
that she never left my side,
because she knew within the beats
of my heart was exactly where she'd reside...
captured love unconditional...
Fave Lines:I still dream...
about our bodies
tying our souls together,
tethered to a reality
that she never left my side,
because she knew within the beats
of my heart was exactly where she'd reside...
0
re: Re: I Still...
6th Sep 2013 5:46pm
Well unconditional is exactly what I am n I'm so happy you enjoyed my sweetness, I'm honored by your words n friendship :)
Re: I Still...
6th Sep 2013 8:03pm
re: Re: I Still...
8th Sep 2013 1:05am
Re: I Still...
Anonymous
8th Sep 2013 00:35am
So dreamy and romantic. Makes me wanna believe..:)
0
re: Re: I Still...
8th Sep 2013 1:04am
Thank you, makes you wanna believe huh?
hhhmmmm sounds like another hot hard n hurt...
Trust me closing oneself off to the belief can be a very lonely
future... For whatever time one has with love, into opinion
it's always worth the threat of heartache... Truly appreciate ur thoughts n time reading my ink :)
hhhmmmm sounds like another hot hard n hurt...
Trust me closing oneself off to the belief can be a very lonely
future... For whatever time one has with love, into opinion
it's always worth the threat of heartache... Truly appreciate ur thoughts n time reading my ink :)
Re. I Still...
27th Sep 2017 6:44am
I absolutely loved this... very romantic. Makes me wish someone felt this about me! Alas I'm young. I can wait. Lol.
Great write, I enjoyed it a lot!
Great write, I enjoyed it a lot!
1
Re: Re. I Still...
27th Sep 2017 1:18pm
Aaaaawww thank you sweetie...n Yea you will...just be patient n careful... appreciate the RL add support :)