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Crawl Inside His Throat
His slippery ability
charmed me,
I wanted to crawl
inside his
throat,
Feeling his voice
vibrate all over
my pink
appeal,
Every letter formed,
as dripping desire
captivated him,
I supplied him with
a lavish amount
of sugar,
Saying his name until
there was nothing
left of me,
But my voice
charmed me,
I wanted to crawl
inside his
throat,
Feeling his voice
vibrate all over
my pink
appeal,
Every letter formed,
as dripping desire
captivated him,
I supplied him with
a lavish amount
of sugar,
Saying his name until
there was nothing
left of me,
But my voice
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Re: Crawl Inside His Throat
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4th Sep 2013 10:22pm
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4th Sep 2013 10:24pm
Re: Crawl Inside His Throat
Anonymous
4th Sep 2013 10:33pm
great imagery here tl
strider!
strider!
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4th Sep 2013 10:39pm
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5th Sep 2013 00:07am
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5th Sep 2013 6:26pm
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5th Sep 2013 6:27pm
Re: Crawl Inside His Throat
5th Sep 2013 1:51am
Super sensual! The Texas judge gives this passage:
"Feeling his voice
vibrate all over
my pink
appeal"
10 tingles! Well done Tommie :)
"Feeling his voice
vibrate all over
my pink
appeal"
10 tingles! Well done Tommie :)
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5th Sep 2013 6:28pm
Re: Crawl Inside His Throat
Anonymous
5th Sep 2013 6:19pm
This is like Honey, I Shrunk the Kids! if it was sexy ;)
Seriously though, it's neat how even something as simple as a voice can make you melt, to the point you want to be all up in it, and this poem conveys that. Nice!
Seriously though, it's neat how even something as simple as a voice can make you melt, to the point you want to be all up in it, and this poem conveys that. Nice!
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re: Re: Crawl Inside His Throat
5th Sep 2013 6:30pm
Ha ha...so true!
There's something about a voice I just really enjoy...I know a guy with an amazing voice I just want to be swallowed by him!!
Thanks for reading M ;)
There's something about a voice I just really enjoy...I know a guy with an amazing voice I just want to be swallowed by him!!
Thanks for reading M ;)
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6th Sep 2013 8:18pm
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