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Wasting The Day~
White lace
worn just right
the straps
waiting to be
undone
It's my day off
so he's
going to get
me off
My ass
thinking of his
grasp waiting for
him to
get home
We'll waste
away the day
in bed
and soak
each other in
love
worn just right
the straps
waiting to be
undone
It's my day off
so he's
going to get
me off
My ass
thinking of his
grasp waiting for
him to
get home
We'll waste
away the day
in bed
and soak
each other in
love
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re: Re: Wasting The Day~
4th Sep 2013 1:06pm
Re: Wasting The Day~
4th Sep 2013 1:41pm
That doesn't seem to be wasted time at all :) I'd call that precious, to-be-savored time...besides, if done right, love making's a lot of hard work :D Well done Tommie :)
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re: Re: Wasting The Day~
4th Sep 2013 6:51pm
Re: Wasting The Day~
Anonymous
4th Sep 2013 4:27pm
Tommie,
Geeeze!!! Talk about paradise staring you straight in the face....Yes, your idea of waisting time is a chart topper, for sure!!! I can appreciate your anticipation of the grasp of this one ; )
tornado
Geeeze!!! Talk about paradise staring you straight in the face....Yes, your idea of waisting time is a chart topper, for sure!!! I can appreciate your anticipation of the grasp of this one ; )
tornado
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4th Sep 2013 6:52pm
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4th Sep 2013 5:22pm
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4th Sep 2013 6:53pm
Re: Wasting The Day~
4th Sep 2013 7:48pm
Why I can't think of a better way 'waste' myself in! lol
Good lord this was heated n yea that pic... Is like M&Ms... Mmmm mmmmm GOOD!! lol god bless u for posting that lol
Good lord this was heated n yea that pic... Is like M&Ms... Mmmm mmmmm GOOD!! lol god bless u for posting that lol
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re: Re: Wasting The Day~
4th Sep 2013 8:51pm
Re: Wasting The Day~
4th Sep 2013 8:51pm
Could be titled WAISTING The Day, judging from the pic! (Good way to dress up for such a day.)
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re: Re: Wasting The Day~
4th Sep 2013 8:52pm
Re: Wasting The Day~
I want to spend MY day off like that...and be able to wear something like that, lol. Don't get me wrong, my body ain't bad...but my ass ain't that great! Much credit!!! for both!
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5th Sep 2013 00:48am